aaj shaam unse baat na hui

by milkysahu on September 25, 2009, 10:23:03 AM
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aaj shaam unse baat na hui,
andhera ho gaya par raat na hui,
aaj shaam unse baat na hui..

chand bhi nikal aaya, taare bhi jaagne lage,
hawa ke jhonke mujhe, chhedkar bhaagne lage,
baadal to ghir aaye, par barsaat na hui,
aaj shaam unse baat na hui..

khidki par baithi, soch rahi thi main,
anjaani galti par khudko, kos rahi thi main,
kyun unke pyar ki aaj saugat na hui,
aaj shaam unse baat na hui..

kamre ki batti ko neend aane lagi,
chaadar bhi pasarne ko kasmasaane lagi,
ghadi boli soja, ab to aadhi raat hui,
aaj shaam unse baat na hui..
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«Reply #1 on: September 25, 2009, 10:29:04 AM »
Nice try



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«Reply #2 on: September 25, 2009, 11:32:43 AM »
hmmmmmm..... meri kahaani bayan ki ye tho....

same same kissa yahan b kayam hai~

nice one and welcum 2 yo!
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poppoetry
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«Reply #3 on: September 25, 2009, 02:05:08 PM »
Waah bahut khoob sahu ji...welcome to Yo india Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: September 25, 2009, 10:19:11 PM »
Wah bahut khoob Sahu ji,very beautiful creation,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2009, 05:21:42 PM »
aaj shaam unse baat na hui,
andhera ho gaya par raat na hui,
aaj shaam unse baat na hui..

chand bhi nikal aaya, taare bhi jaagne lage,
hawa ke jhonke mujhe, chhedkar bhaagne lage,
baadal to ghir aaye, par barsaat na hui,
aaj shaam unse baat na hui..

khidki par baithi, soch rahi thi main,
anjaani galti par khudko, kos rahi thi main,
kyun unke pyar ki aaj saugat na hui,
aaj shaam unse baat na hui..

kamre ki batti ko neend aane lagi,
chaadar bhi pasarne ko kasmasaane lagi,
ghadi boli soja, ab to aadhi raat hui,
aaj shaam unse baat na hui..

bahut khoob nice line touching in my heart Applause Applause Applause
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