ab main nhi karta tumse pyar

by likemaddy on August 11, 2010, 05:35:47 AM
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Ab main nhi karta tumhara intjar,
ab nhi hota h dil bekrar,
pahle tumhare didar ko tarsta tha dil.
par ab main nhi karta tumse payar


akal  bigad jati thi meri,
jab aati thi yad tumhari,
chod diya tha mano sara sansar,
but ab nhi karta tumse payar.


kitnaaaa chahta tha tumhe,
kitna manta tha tumhe,
tum thi mere har mosam ki bahar,
par ab main nhi karta tumse pyar.


tum thi meri apni jaan se pyari,
sab ko kahta tha ki ye h jaan hamari,
teri har ada thi nyari nyari,
or ab yaad nhi aati h surat tumhari,

pahle tu mere sapno me thi aati,
muje tdpati thi or khud muskati.
ab to mahine beet jate h,
or tumhari yad tak nhi aati.

tu kitabon me thi mere,
tu vicharon me thi mere,
tu sapno me thi mere,
han han tu apno me thi mere.

dil ki rani thi tu,
meri eklouti premkhani thi tu,
Tera bhoot tha mijh pr swar,
but sachchi ab nhi karta tumse pyar.

tum sochti hogi ki aisa kyon hua,
jo itna khaas tha, wo praya kyon hua,
such bataun, kyon nhi karta tumse pyar,
kyonki meri shaadi ho gayi h mere yaar!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 11, 2010, 06:07:04 AM »
maddy ji....aaj achanak aapko aise dekha yakeen nahin hua..... Feared.

wowwww.....simple sidhe saade andaaz me kitna kuch keh gaye aap... icon_thumleft

mast re....bht mast........ icon_flower
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«Reply #2 on: August 11, 2010, 08:38:46 AM »
wah kya baat hai Maddy... kitana sundar aur sach likha hai aapne...

pyar me kisiko yeh din na dekhana pade aisi khuda se gujarish karta hu...
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«Reply #3 on: August 11, 2010, 09:03:33 AM »
Nice poem....likemind-ji... Applause Applause Applause

Ab main nhi karta tumhara intjar,
ab nhi hota h dil bekrar,
pahle tumhare didar ko tarsta tha dil.
par ab main nhi karta tumse payar


akal  bigad jati thi meri,
jab aati thi yad tumhari,
chod diya tha mano sara sansar,
but ab nhi karta tumse payar.


kitnaaaa chahta tha tumhe,
kitna manta tha tumhe,
tum thi mere har mosam ki bahar,
par ab main nhi karta tumse pyar.


tum thi meri apni jaan se pyari,
sab ko kahta tha ki ye h jaan hamari,
teri har ada thi nyari nyari,
or ab yaad nhi aati h surat tumhari,

pahle tu mere sapno me thi aati,
muje tdpati thi or khud muskati.
ab to mahine beet jate h,
or tumhari yad tak nhi aati.

tu kitabon me thi mere,
tu vicharon me thi mere,
tu sapno me thi mere,
han han tu apno me thi mere.

dil ki rani thi tu,
meri eklouti premkhani thi tu,
Tera bhoot tha mijh pr swar,
but sachchi ab nhi karta tumse pyar.

tum sochti hogi ki aisa kyon hua,
jo itna khaas tha, wo praya kyon hua,
such bataun, kyon nhi karta tumse pyar,
kyonki meri shaadi ho gayi h mere yaar!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 11, 2010, 09:22:29 AM »
Sach me likemaddy ji aapka ye andaaz kuch alag hi hai... bahut hi pyaara aur bahut saaf aur saral shabdon me sunaai gayi ek poori kahaani hai ye... bahut hi pyaara likha hai aapne...!!!

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«Reply #5 on: August 11, 2010, 09:27:50 AM »
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Thank you all

Vaise aaj mera Birth day bhi hai

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«Reply #6 on: August 11, 2010, 09:33:37 AM »
Many many happy returns of the day Likemaddy ji.... Wish you a very Happy Birthday...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: August 11, 2010, 09:40:40 AM »
Janamdin ki bhaot bahot subhkamnayein... aane wala har pal aapke jeevan me nayi khushi aur dher sara pyar barsaye...

Happy Birthday To You Maddy...
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«Reply #8 on: August 11, 2010, 11:52:44 AM »
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Thanks once again my dears

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«Reply #9 on: August 11, 2010, 12:19:39 PM »
HAPPY BIRTHDAY MADDY JI....

MAY GOD SHOWER LOTS OF BLESSINGS ON U
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«Reply #10 on: August 11, 2010, 12:26:31 PM »
Wish you a very happy birthday Likemaddy ji,God bless you and grant the desires of your heart.hve  blessed birthday.aur aapke poem bhi lajawaab hai.mindblowing creation.maine wish kiya tha par pata nahi kis wajah se post nahi aayi. occasion13 occasion13 occasion13 occasion13 occasion13 occasion13 occasion15 occasion15 occasion15 occasion15 occasion15 occasion15
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«Reply #11 on: August 13, 2010, 03:33:49 AM »
HAPPY BIRTHDAY MADDY JI....

MAY GOD SHOWER LOTS OF BLESSINGS ON U

Thanks kasak jee

bahoot bahoot shukriya
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«Reply #12 on: August 13, 2010, 03:35:07 AM »
Wish you a very happy birthday Likemaddy ji,God bless you and grant the desires of your heart.hve  blessed birthday.aur aapke poem bhi lajawaab hai.mindblowing creation.maine wish kiya tha par pata nahi kis wajah se post nahi aayi. occasion13 occasion13 occasion13 occasion13 occasion13 occasion13 occasion15 occasion15 occasion15 occasion15 occasion15 occasion15

thanks Madhu jee

thanks jo aapne kamare liye itni sari shubh kamnayen post ki

bahoot bahoot shukriya

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