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Dard dil ka dil me rakha hai maine ab tak
Aaj na jane kyun tumse har dard kehne ka dil kiya
Bht baha liye maine aansu akele muh chhupakar
Aaj tere seene se lagkar betahasha rone ka dil kiya
Nahin jii sakti main yun tere bagair ee jaan meri
Aaj kyun fir kisi tarah maut ko gale lagane ka dil kiya
Teri saanson se chal rahi hain saansein meri ee sanam
Aaj sare aam duniya se ye keh dena ka dil kiya
Tere pyaar me jii rahi hun aur tere liye hi mar jana hai mujhe
Aaj saari duniya k saamne apne pyaar ka ikraar karne ka dil kiya.......
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ishk ek ibadat
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«Reply #1 on: July 12, 2010, 02:56:09 PM » |
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Dard dil ka dil me rakha hai maine ab tak
Aaj na jane kyun tumse har dard kehne ka dil kiya
Bht baha liye maine aansu akele muh chhupakar
Aaj tere seene se lagkar betahasha rone ka dil kiya
Nahin jii sakti main yun tere bagair ee jaan meri
Aaj kyun fir kisi tarah maut ko gale lagane ka dil kiya
Teri saanson se chal rahi hain saansein meri ee sanam
Aaj sare aam duniya se ye keh dena ka dil kiya
Tere pyaar me jii rahi hun aur tere liye hi mar jana hai mujhe
Aaj saari duniya k saamne apne pyaar ka ikraar karne ka dil kiya.......
[/size][/color] Its too good .......Kasak Ji......bahut khoob ... dil se daad ! |
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«Reply #2 on: July 12, 2010, 04:54:54 PM » |
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ishq ji aapko ye pasand aai yehi bht badi baat hai hamare liye.....shukriya ji....kabhi kahin kuch kami lage hamare likhne me to bataiyega jarur.....
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«Reply #3 on: July 12, 2010, 08:22:04 PM » |
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bahut khoob kasak ji...
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«Reply #4 on: July 12, 2010, 10:04:04 PM » |
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 waah ...!!! bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kasak hi... bahut hi sundar...!!! Dil ko chhoo gayi aapke kavita... bahut pyaari kavita hai...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 13, 2010, 05:12:54 AM » |
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Nice one Kasak ji, Yun hi achha-achha likhte rahein.  |
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«Reply #6 on: July 13, 2010, 08:16:51 AM » |
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shukriya aap sabka jinhone meri koshish ko saraha...aur pasand kiya.....thnx a lot ji k aap sabne apna waqt diya mujh naacheez ko
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«Reply #7 on: July 14, 2010, 08:27:04 AM » |
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Bahut bahut Khoob kasak Dil ki ji....
bahut Hi Khoobsurat peshkash!!!
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«Reply #9 on: September 14, 2010, 07:48:04 AM » |
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bahut badhiya he ji.....aap to chha gaye~
dil kiya dil ki bat kehene ka bas labz na mil sake......
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«Reply #10 on: September 14, 2010, 07:50:49 AM » |
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Kuchh Lafz bina kahe Alfaaz hote hai.. Kuchh Log iss kadar Khaas hote hai.. Dost chaahe jitne door ho Nigaaho se.. Lekin fir bhi Dil ke utne hi paas hote hai.. Praveen K.  |
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«Reply #11 on: September 14, 2010, 07:56:18 AM » |
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bahut badhiya he ji.....aap to chha gaye~
dil kiya dil ki bat kehene ka bas labz na mil sake......
shukriya abhi ji aapki tareef ka hum hamesha intezar karte hain... aur ye kya agar aapko lafz nahin mile to hamara kya hoga ji....... |
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«Reply #12 on: September 14, 2010, 07:57:33 AM » |
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Dard dil ka dil me rakha hai maine ab tak
Aaj na jane kyun tumse har dard kehne ka dil kiya
Bht baha liye maine aansu akele muh chhupakar
Aaj tere seene se lagkar betahasha rone ka dil kiya
Nahin jii sakti main yun tere bagair ee jaan meri
Aaj kyun fir kisi tarah maut ko gale lagane ka dil kiya
Teri saanson se chal rahi hain saansein meri ee sanam
Aaj sare aam duniya se ye keh dena ka dil kiya
Tere pyaar me jii rahi hun aur tere liye hi mar jana hai mujhe
Aaj saari duniya k saamne apne pyaar ka ikraar karne ka dil kiya.......
Bahut khoobsurat lekhni hai aap ki Anamika Ji |
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«Reply #13 on: September 14, 2010, 07:58:09 AM » |
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Kuchh Lafz bina kahe Alfaaz hote hai.. Kuchh Log iss kadar Khaas hote hai.. Dost chaahe jitne door ho Nigaaho se.. Lekin fir bhi Dil ke utne hi paas hote hai.. Praveen K. shukriya praven ji aap k is khubsurat sher k liye |
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«Reply #14 on: September 14, 2010, 07:58:36 AM » |
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Bahut khoobsurat lekhni hai aap ki Anamika Ji
thnx sir ji ...for beautiful comment |
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