ATUT RISHTA

by sanketkalyani on February 26, 2010, 10:19:27 AM
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sanketkalyani
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LAB PAR HO HANSI YA AANKHO ME NAMI HO HUMNE UNKO SATH PAYA,
HAN ISI LIYE TO HUM NE EK DUJE KO APNAYA.

LOG DEKAR TOD JATE HAI JISE AKSAR US VADE KO HUM DONO NE NIBHAYA,
TAQDEER NE HI SHAYAD HUM SE YE NAMUMKIN SA KAM KARVAYA.

SACHCHA PYAR KABHI RATON AUR BATON KA MOHTAZ NAHI HOTA, YE UNHO NE HI TO SAMAJ AYA,
JUDA NA HONGE JAB TAK JISM KO RUH NASIB HAI AISA HUMDONO NE DOHARAYA.

KHUBSURTI KO USKI RAB NE KUCHH IS TARAH HAI TARASHA KI KYA KAHNE, LABZON ME AAJTAK KOI BAYAN KAR NA PAYA
KOI NEK DUA KA HI ASAR HOGA JO US KHUDA NE CHAND KHUBIYAN APNI DEKAR MERE LIYE USE IS DHARTI PAR BHIJAVAYA                

SHUKRIYA TAHE DIL SE ME KISKA ADA KARU, US PARVARDIGAR KA YA MERE PYAR KA, YE TAY NA KAR PAYA,
BAS YUN SAMAJ LIJIYE KE EK NE DIYA HAI MUJE JIVAN TO DUSARE NE JINA SIKHAYA.
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riyaz106
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«Reply #1 on: February 26, 2010, 10:32:34 AM »
Sanketkalyani ji khayalaat aur jazbaat ko poem ka roop dene mein khoob achhi koshish ki aapne. Poem ki lines Zara balanced rahen, iski bhi koshish kijiye.
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #2 on: February 26, 2010, 10:37:45 AM »
KHAYAL EKDUM PERFECT HAI.BUT KEEP PROPER PLACING AND SPACING.
 icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower KEEP IT UP.
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cara
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«Reply #3 on: February 26, 2010, 11:11:51 AM »
WAH KYA BAAT HAI    SANKETKALYANI JI....

HAR KHUSHI HAR GAM MEIN ME EK DOOSRE KA SAATH PAYA
TABI TOH YE RISHTA APNA "ATUT RISHTA" HAI BAN PAYA

WOH HAMKO SAMAJHTE HAI HAM UNKO HAI SAMAJH PAYA
TABI TOH YE RISHTA APNA"ATUT RISHTA"HAI BAN PAYA

SOCH SAMAJHKAR MALIK NE HAM DONO KI JODI BANAYA
TABI TOH YE RISHTA APNA"ATUT RISHTA" HAI BAN PAYA..
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