Bada Mayabi "Stri" nuhen Kahari - Oriya

by asulitu on January 03, 2011, 05:03:18 AM
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asulitu
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bada mayabi stri nuhen kahari
jetebele sasu gharu anilu taku
kahithila bolamani se chalibaku

prathama masare se mana ra mita
ditiya masare se mariba nata
katha na maniba kahari.
bada mayabi stri nuhen kahari

trutiya masare magiba sadhi chudi
chaturthare kahiba dio cash
karibi suna hara tiari
bada mayabi stri nuhen kahari

hoile masa pancha kahiba daha micha
cha masa belaku kahiba hate randhi parasa
mu chua maa hebi tumari
bada mayabi stri nuhen kahari

hoile masa sata khojiba mansa bhata
atha masare kane asi kahiba
biki chaliba jami gahiri
bada mayabi stri nuhen kahari

9 masa hela khyani kahiba chuli alaga
chadi dio tama bhai bhauni
sabubele katha mana mohari
bada mayabi stri nuhen kahari

au dasa mase nari - maa heba peta chiri
pila ki kakhei dina jiba tumari
bada mayabi stri nuhen kahari

egara mase puni
marana maisi seta nuhen gharani
hoile masa bara chadi chali jiba bapa ghara
dekhibaku anya bara
kaha age karibu guhari
bada mayabi stri nuhen kahari
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nirala
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«Reply #1 on: January 03, 2011, 05:20:04 AM »
oye hoye--
kana lekhilu re bhai. mana ta chhini nelu re poora.
"bada mayabi stri nuhen kahari
    dekhile mana chana chana hoi kariba guhari
"
asulitu mast lekhichu bhai.
very good.
"
thanx
"
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asulitu
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«Reply #2 on: January 03, 2011, 05:23:52 AM »
Thanks Nirala Bhai....
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nirala
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«Reply #3 on: January 03, 2011, 05:37:32 AM »
keep writing always..Usual Smile
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ek_tamanna
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«Reply #4 on: February 08, 2011, 11:34:51 AM »
haaN mate bhi bhala lagila yeh poem
roman oriya ta aau tike bhala kari lekhe
padhibaku subidha haba

tc
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nirala
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«Reply #5 on: February 08, 2011, 11:59:03 AM »
oye hoye
ki sundar drusya:)
ethi aamar oriya loka achanti Usual Smile
m happy re
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ek_tamanna
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«Reply #6 on: February 08, 2011, 12:05:34 PM »
hahahaha .......khali oriya loka nuheiN poet bhi ........
mate bi bahut bhala lagila ethi yeh poem aau aapananka reply ......muN ta biswash kari paruni ki ete bhala Hindi nuzm kehi jane, oriya bhi lekhi pare

badhai ho ...............
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nirala
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«Reply #7 on: February 08, 2011, 12:21:56 PM »
achha !!
mate biswaas hauni je tamar hindi au poetry mor thu auri bhala ---
tame kemiti oriya reply dela amesing:!)
kamaal hai bas
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ek_tamanna
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«Reply #8 on: February 08, 2011, 12:38:17 PM »
tumathu bhala nuheiN ...........

mun ete bhala hindi poem lekheni .......khali padhibaku aasichhi ethi.......

Oriya reply daba ete muskil nuheiN .........muN oriya..
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nirala
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«Reply #9 on: February 08, 2011, 12:46:39 PM »
aaaaaaaaa oriya jhia!
mu bhi ethi padhibaku aasichi baas.
au lokanku birakta kare emti semti lekhi ki Usual Smile
orissa me ho ya au kauthi??
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ek_tamanna
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«Reply #10 on: February 08, 2011, 12:52:29 PM »
pare kahibi ...........eithi nuheiN ......
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nirala
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«Reply #11 on: February 08, 2011, 01:03:18 PM »
ok bosss !!!!
wese tamar ichha---
bt mu tamar nex poem ra wait karuchi-- tamar Alfaaz gudaka very bhala laage .
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