DoSTi - PaRT 3

by akashsharma1990 on June 03, 2012, 06:17:53 PM
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College ke char saal jane kab nikale
Kitni raatein kati aur din kitne dhale

Ek sath ho kar the hum yun chale fir
Kyun lgta hai ki milke bhi hum na mile.

Hua jhagda khub hui bohot ladai
Par end me na shikwe na the koi gile

Shuru hui thi dosti aanzano mein
Family banke kyun khatam hue ye silsile

Roz ki aadat ho gyi thi milna tum sab se
Kal ke baad katege din kaise agar tum na mile

Yeh chaar saal kyun itni jaldi gye chale
Koi Kitni bhi koshish karle.....
Man se tumhari ye yaadein bilkul na nikale........
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Written for my friends....
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«Reply #1 on: June 04, 2012, 01:48:58 AM »
zabardast bhai..... college ke wo din dosto ke sath bitaye pal..... guzre zamane bahut yaad aate hai h......very nice... aur ek rau bhi aapki khidmat mein hajir hai, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: June 04, 2012, 04:05:52 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: June 04, 2012, 04:24:35 AM »
zabardast bhai..... college ke wo din dosto ke sath bitaye pal..... guzre zamane bahut yaad aate hai h......very nice... aur ek rau bhi aapki khidmat mein hajir hai, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Sahi kaha vo pal yaad aate hai aur aate rahenge....
Dhnyawaad ripan bhai...
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«Reply #4 on: June 04, 2012, 04:25:48 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause
Applause Applause Applause Applause
Dhnyawaad saini sir
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«Reply #5 on: June 04, 2012, 01:32:32 PM »
bahot ache Akash ji
thora apne shabdon ko aur rythm denge to ehsaas kuch jada hi nikhar jaenge
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khus rahie
muskurate rahie
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er.pushpendra1
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«Reply #6 on: June 05, 2012, 04:52:08 AM »

nice dear very nice
engg k char saalo me ham naye naye logo se milte hai
nayi nayi baate sikhte hai, or kuchh cheeje aisi ho jati hai jo kabhi nahi bhulayi ja sakti .
Bahut achha likha hai tumne
aise hi likhte raho or dil se soch kar likho
kyoki jo dil ki feeling hoti hai wahi shabd ban jate hai.
All the best
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