Gazal : Kabhi to asman se Chaand utre Jaam ho jaaye.

by R.M. Dixit on November 20, 2010, 01:35:22 PM

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R.M. Dixit

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Kabhi to jamin pe chaand utre jaam ho jaaye
   Tumare naam ki ek khoob suret shaam ho jaye.

   Mujhe maloom hai uska thikana phir kahan hoga
   Parinda asman chune main naakam ho jaye.

   Ajeb haalat main dil ka sauda hogaya aakhir
   Mohabbat ki haveli jistareh neelaam ho jaaye.

   Main ehtiyatan udher se kem guzerta huin
   koi masoom kyon mere khatir badnaam ho jaye.

   Ujale apni yaadon ke hamare saath rahne do
   Na jane kis gali main zindgi ki shaam ho jaye

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Re: Gazal : Kabhi to asman se Chaand utre Jaam ho jaaye.

«Reply #1 on: November 20, 2010, 10:27:28 PM »

"Main ehtiyatan udher se kam guzarta hoon,
Koi masoom kyun mere khatir badnaam ho jaye.."

Bahaut bahaut khoob..!
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zarra

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Re: Gazal : Kabhi to asman se Chaand utre Jaam ho jaaye.

«Reply #2 on: November 21, 2010, 07:59:38 AM »

dixit ji. bahaut hi umda ghazal hai. behad khoobsurat ehsaas aur bayaan.


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R.M. Dixit

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Re: Gazal : Kabhi to asman se Chaand utre Jaam ho jaaye.

«Reply #3 on: November 21, 2010, 08:09:13 AM »

Thanks Rahim Miyan aapne
AApne gazal ko pasand kiya
daad se nawaja.


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mamta bajpai

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Re: Gazal : Kabhi to asman se Chaand utre Jaam ho jaaye.

«Reply #4 on: November 22, 2010, 01:09:55 AM »

Dixit jee! Baseer 'Badra'saaheb kaa ye shair bahut pasand kiyaa gayaa.....

Ujaale apnee yaadoN ke humaare saath rahne do
na jaane kis gali me zindagee kee shaam ho jaaye

Bahut achchha hotaa aap unkaa naam bhee yahaaN likhte ...thanks 4 nice sharing...


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Re: Gazal : Kabhi to asman se Chaand utre Jaam ho jaaye.

«Reply #5 on: November 22, 2010, 06:14:30 AM »

khwahish bas itni hai..
zindagi ki har dua me aaapka saath ho jaye,
kabhi to chand jameen pe utre or saari roshni humare naam ho jaye!!!
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bahut khoobsurat Ghazal likhi aapne Dixit sahab..bahut umda:) Usual Smile


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R.M. Dixit

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Re: Gazal : Kabhi to asman se Chaand utre Jaam ho jaaye.

«Reply #6 on: November 24, 2010, 05:35:39 PM »

Quote from: mamta bajpai on November 22, 2010, 01:09:55 AM

Dixit jee! Baseer 'Badra'saaheb kaa ye shair bahut pasand kiyaa gayaa.....

Ujaale apnee yaadoN ke humaare saath rahne do

   Mamta aapne baja pnphermaya
   ye bashir Badra ki hi gazal.
   Derasal koi space nahin thi
   jahan shayer ka naam likhna ho.
   Aapne bhi khoob pehchana.
   Na jane kis gali main zindgi ki
   Shaam ho jaye. Please batayen aur
   kis Shayer ki kaunsi gazal aapko
   pasand hai. Main pesh kerdunga.
   So nice of u. Bye Bye.


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R.M. Dixit

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Re: Gazal : Kabhi to asman se Chaand utre Jaam ho jaaye.

«Reply #7 on: November 24, 2010, 05:40:44 PM »

Hi Kilbill,
Thanks for attending and offering
your favourable comments on the
gazal of Bashir badra presented by
me.All the Best. bye Bye.


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