jazbaat-e-dil

by shahida.manha on September 09, 2012, 08:04:17 PM
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 "saath ho tum par paas nahi,chahoge tum hamein  kabhi iski koi aas nahi,naa loon naam tumhara kat thi meri saans nahi, bin aapke zindagi hamari kuch khaas nahi, bas dard hai itna saath ho tum par paas nahi, chahoge tum hamein kabhi iski koi aas nahi".
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«Reply #1 on: September 10, 2012, 12:45:21 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: September 10, 2012, 03:26:31 AM »

"saath  ho  tum  par  paas  nahi,
chahoge tum hamein  kabhi iski koi aas nahi,

naa loon naam tumhara kat ti meri saans nahi,
bin aapke zindagi hamari kuch khaas nahi,

bas dard hai itna saath ho tum par paas nahi,
chahoge tum hamein kabhi iski koi aas nahi".


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«Reply #3 on: September 10, 2012, 07:01:15 AM »
nice, Tauhid ji ne theek pharmaya, padhne mein aasani hogi
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