khuch batein

by Rimpa khanrah on December 17, 2012, 11:17:24 AM
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khuch batein ehbhi they khass
Par keya tumhe tha ahsass
Jane kis tarha kis lamha
Aah geye tum dike itne pass

Labo se na humne khanha kabhi
Akhonse magar kiya bayan sabhi
Apna bas mana hai humne tujhe
Chahe toh kehdo tum hume ajnabi

Kitnehi rusbai humko mile
Na karenge kabhi tumse gile
Lakh bandise aye roke diwar
Rukenge na eh chahatke silsile

Basaya hai chehra tera nigaho me
Chahe na mile jindegi teri bahome
Itna haq tu hume de na zara
Ke mar paye hum tere panaho me...... love9

 
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«Reply #1 on: December 17, 2012, 11:27:29 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: December 17, 2012, 12:03:09 PM »
boht khub thoda spellingr par dhyan rakhein
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«Reply #3 on: December 17, 2012, 12:57:44 PM »
very very nice
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«Reply #4 on: December 17, 2012, 05:39:57 PM »
Very nice....
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«Reply #5 on: December 18, 2012, 02:39:06 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut bahut sundar, bahut khoob Rimpa ji..!!!
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«Reply #6 on: December 18, 2012, 07:22:40 AM »
Applause good one
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«Reply #7 on: December 18, 2012, 07:47:25 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #8 on: December 18, 2012, 09:59:41 AM »
very nice
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