kuch kar dikhana hai......................akash sharma

by akashsharma1990 on June 22, 2012, 04:34:53 AM
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Yeh raha nahi aasan
Sabse aage mujhe jana hai
Yeh kaam nhi aasan
Kuch karke mujhe dikhana hai

Kitne pathar kaante aaye
Raho me Chalte mujhe jana hai
Dur hai manzil meri
Us Manzil ko mujhe pana hai

Kathin hai bada yeh safar
Karunga pura yeh maine thana hai
Kuch bhi mile fal mehnat ka
Us bhagwan ko maine mana hai

Janta hun...
Aasan nahi hai yeh raha
Kuch karke mujhe dikhana hai
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«Reply #1 on: June 22, 2012, 04:40:39 AM »
 Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 22, 2012, 05:40:03 AM »
Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: June 22, 2012, 07:27:04 AM »
Bahut umda likha hai akash jee
dil daad haajir hai..DAAD DAAD
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«Reply #4 on: June 22, 2012, 07:42:23 AM »
khub kaha akash ji
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«Reply #5 on: June 22, 2012, 10:52:34 AM »
GOOD !
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«Reply #6 on: June 22, 2012, 02:06:19 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob likha hai aapne Akash ji....!!!
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«Reply #7 on: June 22, 2012, 02:14:11 PM »
Bahut khoob Aakash bhai, bahut khoob. Kaafi achha laga aapka ye kalam mujhe.
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«Reply #8 on: June 22, 2012, 04:59:24 PM »
Aap sab ka dhanyawaad
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«Reply #9 on: June 22, 2012, 05:01:05 PM »
bahut badhiya aakash ji........ khub likha hai aapne... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: June 23, 2012, 12:56:38 PM »
Bahut acche janaab
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«Reply #11 on: June 23, 2012, 02:11:35 PM »
BAHUT HI UMDA PESHKASH HAI AAPKI AKASH JI
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«Reply #12 on: July 24, 2012, 01:05:12 PM »
Congratulation,

Your work has been featured on July 2012 Yoindia Shayariadab newsletter. You can give your feedback as well can read more about it at:
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«Reply #13 on: July 24, 2012, 02:54:27 PM »
bohot bohot dhnyawaad admin sir.....
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