Manzil

by sanjiv gaikwad on December 15, 2010, 07:31:08 AM
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manzil ki chahat raftaar se jyada mayane rakhati hai,

hum itni raftaar pakadte hai,

ki manzil ka thikana bhool jaate hai,

hasil hua to thi hai,

varna isey nasseb par chhod dete hai,

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«Reply #1 on: December 15, 2010, 07:56:05 AM »
gud 1 sanjiv ji
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«Reply #2 on: December 15, 2010, 08:06:13 AM »
manzil ki chahat ---
raftaar ki aahat ---
raftaar me hokar giraftaar
manzil ko na bhool jaana yaar
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«Reply #3 on: December 15, 2010, 08:37:35 AM »
hasil hua to .... Kya

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«Reply #4 on: December 15, 2010, 08:47:40 AM »
gham e dunya mein jaakar dekha kitni bechaini thi
zakham hi zakham they our dard ki kahaani thi
chahar kar bhi hum apne gham ko chupa na sakey
bandh they honth magar kahaani ankhon ki zubaani thi
dil to apna hi tha magar dadhkan anjaani thi
ek taraf lagi thi sanhgdilon ki mehfil wahan
chehrey to chupe hue they awaaz to jaani pehchaani thi
usi awaaz mein dab kar rah gaye mere pyar ki kahaani thi
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«Reply #5 on: December 15, 2010, 08:49:55 AM »
bht khubb saahil ji...
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«Reply #6 on: December 15, 2010, 08:57:31 AM »
thx anu ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 19, 2011, 09:56:45 AM »
manzil ki chahat raftaar se jyada mayane rakhati hai,

hum itni raftaar pakadte hai,

ki manzil ka thikana bhool jaate hai,

hasil hua to thi hai,

varna isey nasseb par chhod dete hai,



nice
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