Mere pati ke liye

by debasree on July 04, 2010, 06:20:16 PM
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Tum mere ankhon ke taare ho,
 Tum mere dil ki ho dhadkan,
Tum mere sapne suhane ho,
Tum mere mann ki ho darpan.

Dekh na pau ansoo tumhare,
 Sah na pau tumhara dard
Tumko khush rakhna kaam hain mera,
 Chahe ho garmi,baarish ya sard.

Aise hi beet te jaate hai din,
 Aise hi beet te raate hai
Pyaar mera kabhi kam na hota,
Yeh to bas barhte hi jate hai.

Ek janam to kam bahut hai,
 Pura pyaar na de paungi
Aagle janamme tumko hi pau
 Rab se dua yeh karungi

Debasree Banerjee
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«Reply #1 on: July 05, 2010, 09:32:36 AM »
Bahot achhi poem hai Debasree ji. Bade achhe vichar hain aapke. Pati-Patni ka rishta bahot mazboot bhi hota hai aur bahot nazuk bhi. Nice creation.
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«Reply #2 on: July 07, 2010, 03:04:58 AM »
bahut khoob likha hai aapne Debasree ji...!!!
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