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pyar dilo ko jodne ka raasta
ya ek khaamos samjhauta
pyar dukho ka saagar
ye ho gaya agar
tadapna padta hai pal pal harpal
intezaar me jindagi jaayegi guzar
pyar majaa ya sajaa
ye dilo ki khataa
pyar jindagi ye dillagi
bewakoofi ya bandagi
pyar ek khel
ya dilo ka mel
pyar naadani
ya hansi kahani
pyar aur kuchh nahi
bas ek khataa anjaani....
ANAND KUMAR"APRIYA
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«Reply #1 on: December 14, 2010, 11:01:38 AM » |
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mastam post ji bht kub apriya ji aapki style of wriying mast lagi hume
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«Reply #2 on: December 14, 2010, 11:46:26 AM » |
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ji shukriya aapka bhi aur unka bhi jinhone haatho me kalam thaamne ki ek wajah di....
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«Reply #3 on: December 14, 2010, 12:02:05 PM » |
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wahhh ji waahhhhh
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«Reply #4 on: December 14, 2010, 01:04:40 PM » |
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Surendra Mardia ji ki ek kavita k kuchh ansh prastut kar rahi hu....
Kavita k 6 stenza mai se kewal 2 stenza.....
"Puchhti tum Pyaar ki Paribhasha
Kaise samjhaun tumhein.....
Pyaar ko
Shabdon mai dhaala nahi ja sakta
Pyaar ko school-collegejon mai
Padhaya nahi ja sakta...
Pyaar ko Seminaaron mai
Seekhaya nahi ja sakta....
Pyaar ko tou Anubhav karna padta hai
Jeevan sa jeena padta hai...."
Pyaar aseem hai....
Pyaar vishwaash hai...
Pyaar kisi paribhashaa ka mohtaaj nahi
Pyaar Amrit Pyala hai...
Pyaar, Pyaar hai...Pyaar, Pyaar hai...
Haan !!!
Pyaar kewal nirmal suddh pyaar hai....
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«Reply #5 on: December 14, 2010, 01:08:18 PM » |
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ntamastak aapki prastuti ke saamne mai....par agar koshish ki jaaye to kuchh bhi namumkin nhi hai fir chahe wo pyar ki paribhasha ho ya kuchh aur....
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«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2010, 01:17:58 PM » |
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Chhuan(jo ki jaad hai) ke anubhav ke aanand ko shabdo mai paribhaashit karna jitna mushkil hai...
Usse kahin jayaada na mumkin sa hai Pyaar ke anubhav ko paribhaashit karna jo kewal ek feeling hai.....ehsaass hai.....aysa mein maanti hoon....
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«Reply #7 on: December 14, 2010, 01:26:20 PM » |
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aadarniya koyal ji
yu dekhe to pura sahitya jagat bas bhawnao, ehsaaso ko shabdo me dhale jaane ka gawah hai......mujhe nhi lagta ki koi bhi kaam muskil bas jarurat hoti hai ek koshish ki....shayad meri ye rachna bahut buri hai par koshish ki hai maine aur mere liye meri har rachna mere ehsaaso ka kavya prasfuttan hai...mai kavita nhi bas apne pyar ko ehsaaso ko bhawnao ko likhne ki koshish karta hu.....aap koyoindian shayar ka darja mila hua hai nischit hi aap behtar hai agar meri kisi baat ka bura laga hoto mai kshama prarthi hu....
aap mera signature padh le sab samajh aa jayega...mai hamesha kehta hu aur kehta rahunga mai ek adna sa lekhak hu mai ek adna sa lekhak hu
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«Reply #8 on: December 14, 2010, 01:34:43 PM » |
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wah wah Chote --
kya gazab ka likha bhai..
sach me pyar ke paribhasha me uljha diya mujhe--
bhot khub
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pyar ki paribhasha kya hai
puch lo jakar laila se majnu se..
pyar ki paribhasha kya hai
puch lo jakar heer se aur ranjhe se..
wo bhi na bata payenge shabdo me ..
payar to pyar hai
iski nhi koi parisbhasa hai..
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«Reply #9 on: December 14, 2010, 01:38:28 PM » |
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vigyan jagat ka newton na ban paunga
socha pyar kohi paribhashit kar amar ho jau
bas duniya yaad rakhe ek bewaffa ke aashiq ko
kaam kuchh ais mai kar jau.....
bas shadbo me dhaal du dil ko apne
fir chahe mai bemaut mar jau....
ab bhi chahta hu use
jee chahta hai uski chahat me kuchh kar jau....
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«Reply #10 on: December 14, 2010, 01:43:43 PM » |
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Anand ji aap galat samajh rahe hain mujhe koi shikayat nahi hai aapki kavita se...na he vicharon se....apni jagah par aap sahi hain......
Ye tou meri apni maanyata hai...aur unki jinki Rachna meine yahaan par quote ki......chuki ye platform "Pyaar ki Paribhaasha" ka tha meine apni baat rakhdi.....Aap jarra bhi esse galat arth me na lein.......
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«Reply #11 on: December 14, 2010, 01:47:34 PM » |
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koyal ji aap nischint rahe...aisi koi baat nhi hai....maine ise bilkul halke fulke dhang se liya hai....agar aapkobura laga to mai punah kshama prarthi hu.....
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«Reply #12 on: December 14, 2010, 05:32:45 PM » |
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pyar dilo ko jodne ka raasta
ya ek khaamos samjhauta
pyar dukho ka saagar
ye ho gaya agar
tadapna padta hai pal pal harpal
intezaar me jindagi jaayegi guzar
pyar majaa ya sajaa
ye dilo ki khataa
pyar jindagi ye dillagi
bewakoofi ya bandagi
pyar ek khel
ya dilo ka mel
pyar naadani
ya hansi kahani
pyar aur kuchh nahi
bas ek khataa anjaani....
ANAND KUMAR"APRIYA
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