sirif tum (nam)

by poonamA on September 15, 2011, 02:51:06 AM
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tu he dikhta hai mujhme jab bhi mai dekhti hu darpan
ji chahta hai kadmo me tere kar du khud ko arpan

par afsos is baat ka hai ...... ki

bar bar woh ehsas hume yeh delate hai
ki hum unhe futi aankh nahi suhate hai
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«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2011, 04:31:06 PM »
Quote from: poonamA on September 15, 2011, 02:51:06 AM
tu he dikhta hai mujhme jab bhi mai dekhti hu darpan
ji chahta hai kadmo me tere kar du khud ko arpan

par afsos is baat ka hai ...... ki

bar bar woh ehsas hume yeh delate hai
ki hum unhe futi aankh nahi suhate hai
baht khub--

agr last line me bhi 'unhe' ki jagah 'tumhe' karti to shayd acha hota
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«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2011, 05:40:40 PM »
sarfire bhai jab last sher ki ist line mei woh hai to uske hisaab se unhe he aayega tumhe nahi
Quote from: sarfira on September 15, 2011, 04:31:06 PM
baht khub--

agr last line me bhi 'unhe' ki jagah 'tumhe' karti to shayd acha hota
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«Reply #3 on: September 19, 2011, 03:31:16 AM »
thanks sarfira ji
Quote from: sarfira on September 15, 2011, 04:31:06 PM
baht khub--

agr last line me bhi 'unhe' ki jagah 'tumhe' karti to shayd acha hota
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