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by Dheeraj dave on September 20, 2013, 02:19:53 PM
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ankhon se man puchh raha he kya saccha kya jhutha he
ye ankhen kya bole akhir inka bhi kuchh toota he
 
gairo se kya aas rakhe jab apno ne mooh pher liya
jiski khatir sab jag chhoda wo hi humse rootha he

jiske aage kholi hamne apne man ki gaanthe sab
pahle usne preet lagayee aur phir humko loota he

maut teri godi me sokar ek din hum ye sochenge
khote khote kya pa baithe,pakar kya kya chhoota he

mein tawayaf to nahi hoo jo karu sabko raaji
tum rooothe ho log khafa he dil bhi toota toota he
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«Reply #1 on: September 20, 2013, 02:37:47 PM »
waah waah
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«Reply #2 on: September 20, 2013, 03:32:22 PM »
ankhon se man puchh raha he kya saccha kya jhutha he
ye ankhen kya bole akhir inka bhi kuchh toota he
 
gairo se kya aas rakhe jab apno ne mooh pher liya
jiski khatir sab jag chhoda wo hi humse rootha he

jiske aage kholi hamne apne man ki gaanthe sab
pahle usne preet lagayee aur phir humko loota he

Wah ..kya baat hai
dil ko choone vaale ashaar kahe hai aapne.

mein tawayaf to nahi hoo jo karu sabko raaji Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
haalat aadmi ko kuch bhi karne par mazboor kar sakte hain par koi khud hi patan ke raaste ko pasand karen to?

ye line thodi der ke liye sochne par mazboor karti hai.

apna khayaal likhna munasib naheen hoga..
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«Reply #3 on: September 20, 2013, 04:01:44 PM »
बहुत खूब सूरत रचना लिखी है.

ankhon se man puchh raha he kya saccha kya jhutha he
ye ankhen kya bole akhir inka bhi kuchh toota he
 
gairo se kya aas rakhe jab apno ne mooh pher liya
jiski khatir sab jag chhoda wo hi humse rootha he

jiske aage kholi hamne apne man ki gaanthe sab
pahle usne preet lagayee aur phir humko loota he

maut teri godi me sokar ek din hum ye sochenge
khote khote kya pa baithe,pakar kya kya chhoota he

mein tawayaf to nahi hoo jo karu sabko raaji
tum rooothe ho log khafa he dil bhi toota toota he

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«Reply #4 on: September 20, 2013, 04:33:50 PM »
khote khote kya pa baithe,pakar kya kya chhoota he

Waah Bahut Khoob Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: September 20, 2013, 05:40:29 PM »
 jiske aage kholi hamne apne man ki gaanthe sab
pahle usne preet lagayee aur phir humko loota he:clap: Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause mind blowing sir just excellent
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«Reply #6 on: September 20, 2013, 09:47:08 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: September 20, 2013, 10:08:26 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: September 21, 2013, 04:27:15 AM »

Dheeraj Jee Aadaab...!

WaaH jee waaH kia kahne behad khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai janab... bade hi khoob khayaaloN ko umdaa lafz diye haiN aapne...

Sabhi ashaar qabil e daad huye haiN... is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

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«Reply #9 on: September 21, 2013, 07:46:58 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaah.. bahut bahut khoob... badi hi achchi peshkash rahi.. hazaron hazaron dili daaaaaaad qubool kijiye..
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«Reply #10 on: September 21, 2013, 09:44:26 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya sabhi ka..
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«Reply #11 on: September 21, 2013, 09:50:45 PM »
ankhon se man puchh raha he kya saccha kya jhutha he
ye ankhen kya bole akhir inka bhi kuchh toota he
 
gairo se kya aas rakhe jab apno ne mooh pher liya
jiski khatir sab jag chhoda wo hi humse rootha he

jiske aage kholi hamne apne man ki gaanthe sab
pahle usne preet lagayee aur phir humko loota he

maut teri godi me sokar ek din hum ye sochenge
khote khote kya pa baithe,pakar kya kya chhoota he

mein tawayaf to nahi hoo jo karu sabko raazi
tum rooothe ho log khafa he dil bhi toota toota he


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