Üçüncü Şahsın Şiiri

by chandramuki on August 31, 2009, 01:43:54 PM
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chandramuki
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Gözlerin gözlerime değince
Felaketim olurdu, ağlardım
Beni evmiyordun bilirdim
Bir sevdiğin vardı duyardım
Çöp gibi bir oğlan ipince
Hayırsızın biriydi fikrimce
Ne zaman karşımda görsem
Öldüreceğimden korkardım
Felaketim olurdu ağlardım

Ne zaman maçkadan geçsem
Limanda hep gemiler olurdu
Ağaçlar kuş gibi öterdi
Bir rüzgar aklımı alırdı
Sessizce bir cigara yakardım
Parmaklarımın ucunu yakardın
Kirpiklerini eğerdin, bakardın
Üşürdüm, içim ürperirdi
Felaketm olurdu, ağlardım
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Roja
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«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2009, 02:16:06 PM »
mai pad nahi payi aap saral hindi or eng mein post kare i too enjoy the poem
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chandramuki
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«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2009, 02:44:43 PM »
thanx yaar, i have written that poem in Turkish languge, i m Turkish myself, here is booked for "other languges" thats why i wrote in Turkish Usual Smile

pad main Indian languge ka sikhna ke liye khoshish karerahahoon

ı hope i have written it correctly laughing4
(i m trying to learn Indian languge )
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #3 on: August 31, 2009, 06:54:48 PM »
Aap jo bhi likha hai achi hogi par samjhi nahi. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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chandramuki
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«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2009, 02:16:15 PM »
shukriya Madhuwesh Usual Smile
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Roja
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«Reply #5 on: September 01, 2009, 02:20:36 PM »
thanx yaar, i have written that poem in Turkish languge, i m Turkish myself, here is booked for "other languges" thats why i wrote in Turkish Usual Smile

pad main Indian languge ka sikhna ke liye khoshish karerahahoon

ı hope i have written it correctly laughing4
(i m trying to learn Indian languge )

Turkish  dontknow... Well... no problem dear.

Yes you wrote correctly.... with simple gender mistake...
 
Per mai indian language sikhne ki khoshish ker rahi hu...(I think you are a girl)

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chandramuki
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«Reply #6 on: September 01, 2009, 02:37:44 PM »
Turkish  dontknow... Well... no problem dear.

Yes you wrote correctly.... with simple gender mistake...
 
Per mai indian language sikhne ki khoshish ker rahi hu...(I think you are a girl)




Yes, i m a girl Usual Smile thanx for the correction yaar :D  lots of things to learn (:
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Roja
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«Reply #7 on: September 01, 2009, 02:45:55 PM »

Yes, i m a girl Usual Smile thanx for the correction yaar :D  lots of things to learn (:

I will surely try to learn  dear  Usual Smile
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javedarshad
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«Reply #8 on: September 01, 2009, 02:52:12 PM »
hi

Turkish

Salam

U have written your poem .
without meaning ,is meaningless

u r welcome here , ask ,whatever u want and learn, urdu is easy.

tx javed
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chandramuki
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«Reply #9 on: September 01, 2009, 03:29:06 PM »
my eng is not enough to translate this, but i ll try. but i warn you, i might meaningles and sound funny. But still.. here we go

when your eyes touch my eyes (when our glances meet)
it d be my bane, i d cry
you didnt love me, i knew it
there were someone alse you loved, i heard
A boy like a straw, so thin
He was kind of a useless, according to my opinion
Whenever i see him in front of me,
i ll be afraid i ll kill him
it d be my bane, i d cry

whenever i walk down through the road
there d be ships in the harbour always
trees d smile like a bird
a wind d take my senses from me
i d take a cigarette quietly
you d burn my fingers tops
you d bow your lashes and look
it d be my bane, i d cry
                       
This is one of my favourites By Attila Ä°lhan

And i tried my best while translating Usual Smile
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javedarshad
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«Reply #10 on: September 01, 2009, 04:45:54 PM »
Tx

Dear Turkish for your efferts



javed
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