~~;zindagi kaa fasaana hai;~~:Other Languages

ek_tamanna

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Mujhse bahot dur mera aasiyaana hai
Na jane kab kahan, mera thikaana hai

ban gaya hai dukh mera pyaara saathi
aansoon ke saath mujhe muskurana hai

haar chuki hu main bhi ishQ ki baazi
ab judai ke aag meiN dil jalaana hai

bada gumaan hai jinhe apne wafaa per
bas ek baar mujhe unheiN aazmaana hai

baat karne ko jo katrataa thaa mujhse
aaj kahta hai woh meraa Deewaana hai

roz bulata hai mujhe daawat mein woh
kabhi fursat se uske.. ghar aana hai

berukhi ke aag meiN jal rahi hun main
bas ehi apni zindagi kaa fasaana hai


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KOYAL46

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Re: ~~;zindagi kaa fasaana hai;~~

«Reply #1 on: February 10, 2011, 01:55:09 PM »

Mast ati sunder poem Tamanna-di.......mazaa aa gayaa....... Applause

Di dard se shuru hui he ye aapki poem.....pehli 8 line aur aakhari 2 line.....dard kehti hain....
Ye daawat aur deewaana wali lines dard ki theme mai kaise aa gayee samjhaiyega.....kya soch raha aapka likhte waqt.....

Ye teri he nahi har naakaam mohbbat ki kahaani hai
Humne sunni naa jaane kitni naariyon ki jabaani hai

Quote from: ek_tamanna on February 10, 2011, 12:45:01 PM


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ek_tamanna

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Re: ~~;zindagi kaa fasaana hai;~~

«Reply #2 on: February 10, 2011, 02:13:06 PM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on February 10, 2011, 01:55:09 PM

Mast ati sunder poem Tamanna-di.......mazaa aa gayaa....... Applause

Ye teri he nahi har naakaam mohbbat ki kahaani hai
Humne sunni naa jaane kitni naariyon ki jabaani hai

dear koyal,
mujhe achha laga yeh sawal sun kar .....kamse kam tumne tahreer ko gahrai se dekha ..........

zindagi mein kabhi kabhi kuchh hasin pal ....baad mein socho to dukh hi deta hai ......

main yahan apni haal bayaN ki hun ........

baat karne ko jo katrataa thaa mujhse
aaj kahta hai woh meraa Deewaana hai

is sher mein maine kaha mera waqt ab mere saath nahin rahi to
jo kabhi mere samne nahin aata tha , jisko maine kabhi layak nahin samjhi ...vo khud ko mera lover kahna suru kar diya hai .......

roz bulata hai mujhe daawat mein woh
kabhi fursat se uske.. ghar aana hai

uske himmat to dekho .....mujhe apne ghar dawat meiN bulata hai
gar apne gham se fursat mile to main aajaungi wahaN

kabhi kabhi sher ko rabt mein rakhne keliye kam word mein bayan kiya jata hai .......soch ke dekho to dard hai ismein

sweety mujhe yakeen hai tumhe meri jawab theek lagegi

with lots of love
Di


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: ~~;zindagi kaa fasaana hai;~~

«Reply #3 on: February 10, 2011, 02:19:33 PM »

Bahut Hi Sunder Aur Dard Aur Pyar Bhara Likha Hai Tamanna JI
U Hi Likhte Rahiye Aur Humesha Khush Rahiye Applause


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nirala

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Re: ~~;zindagi kaa fasaana hai;~~

«Reply #4 on: February 10, 2011, 02:41:14 PM »

hmm tamanna ji--kya kahne bahut khubsurat bayani aapke dard ki.
achha hai gud.
"
bada gumaan tha----
ye line achhi h bahut khub"
ek baar me dekha jaye to niche ke kuch lines pahle ke saath match nhi krte lekin theame me hain---gaur karne par bahut umda aur dard ka ehsaas hota hai.
jaisa aapne define kiya wo baat sachh h janaab:)
u r kamaal Usual Smile

aisi rachnaye milti rahe to dil aage bhi khus hota rahega.
daad hai ji hazaron.
"
thanx
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manzil-e-ishq

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Re: ~~;zindagi kaa fasaana hai;~~

«Reply #5 on: February 11, 2011, 12:23:16 PM »

bht khoob tamanna ji....


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ek_tamanna

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Re: ~~;zindagi kaa fasaana hai;~~

«Reply #6 on: February 11, 2011, 12:41:09 PM »

bahut bahut sukriya ..rishi ji , nirala ji,ishQ ji


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Anshumali

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Re: ~~;zindagi kaa fasaana hai;~~

«Reply #7 on: February 12, 2011, 01:02:46 AM »

Quote from: ek_tamanna on February 10, 2011, 12:45:01 PM

Good One ... Tamanna Ji !

Very Nice Creation ... dil se daad !


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manjum

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Re: ~~;zindagi kaa fasaana hai;~~

«Reply #8 on: February 14, 2011, 11:22:14 AM »

bahut khub tamannaji...

badiya


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yaadein

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Re: ~~;zindagi kaa fasaana hai;~~

«Reply #9 on: January 30, 2012, 06:31:28 PM »

shabdo ko badi hi khoobsurati se piroya hai.. aise hi likhte rahiye...


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