ओ सूर्य!

by Dheeraj dave on February 03, 2013, 07:15:36 AM
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ओ सूर्य! तुम दिखते नहीं हो आजकल
बस गगन में धुंध सी फैली हुई है
रोज आता हूँ मैं छत पर पूजने तुमको मगर
अब अर्घ्य का मेरा नियम टुटा हुआ है
क्यूँ निकलते तुम नहीं हो बादलों को चीरकर
आग का गोला है दिनकर,ये सुना है
बर्फ सा मौसम गलाते क्यूँ नहीं तुम
तुम भी शायद कोई बच्चा हो गए हो
अपने घर में ओढ़कर ऊनी लबादे सो गए हो
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«Reply #1 on: February 03, 2013, 07:37:45 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 03, 2013, 08:55:23 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 03, 2013, 09:11:15 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause very nice.
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«Reply #4 on: February 03, 2013, 09:15:22 AM »
Quote from: Dheeraj dave on February 03, 2013, 07:15:36 AM
ओ सूर्य! तुम दिखते नहीं हो आजकल
बस गगन में धुंध सी फैली हुई है
रोज आता हूँ मैं छत पर पूजने तुमको मगर
अब अर्घ्य का मेरा नियम टुटा हुआ है
क्यूँ निकलते तुम नहीं हो बादलों को चीरकर
आग का गोला है दिनकर,ये सुना है
बर्फ सा मौसम गलाते क्यूँ नहीं तुम
तुम भी शायद कोई बच्चा हो गए हो
अपने घर में ओढ़कर ऊनी लबादे सो गए हो


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«Reply #5 on: February 04, 2013, 05:53:23 AM »
very very good...
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«Reply #6 on: February 04, 2013, 03:46:43 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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