काठ का पुतला प्रभा प्रकास

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काठ का था पुतला
उस में जान दाल दी शिल्पकार ने
ये करिश्मा था शिलापकर का
काठ का नहीं,
ठोकर में था पत्थर
पारखी ने तराश कर
हिरा बना दिया
ये तो जोहरी के हाथो का था कमाल
पत्थर का नहीं,
माटी से सोना उगलवालिया
फसल लहलहा उठी
ये तो हलधर की थी मेहनत वरना
उसका क्या था मोल
आंधी में उड़ जाती
भीड़ में खोजती।
प्रभा प्रकास
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«Reply #1 on: August 10, 2015, 10:00:04 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut sundar rachnaaa....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 10, 2015, 10:41:32 AM »
Awesome.!
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«Reply #3 on: August 10, 2015, 11:44:19 AM »
Quote from: Prabha prakas on August 10, 2015, 08:21:20 AM
काठ का था पुतला
उस में जान दाल दी शिल्पकार ने
ये करिश्मा था शिलापकर का
काठ का नहीं,
ठोकर में था पत्थर
पारखी ने तराश कर
हिरा बना दिया
ये तो जोहरी के हाथो का था कमाल
पत्थर का नहीं,
माटी से सोना उगलवालिया
फसल लहलहा उठी
ये तो हलधर की थी मेहनत वरना
उसका क्या था मोल
आंधी में उड़ जाती
भीड़ में खोजती।
प्रभा प्रकास

बहुत सुन्दर रचना।
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«Reply #4 on: August 10, 2015, 11:49:15 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
behad khubsurat rachna waahhhhhh
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«Reply #5 on: August 10, 2015, 11:52:37 AM »
Bahot umda prabhaji
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«Reply #6 on: August 10, 2015, 11:55:18 AM »
 Shukriya Jeet ji, Umrav ji,Vinery ji, Hriday ji icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #7 on: August 10, 2015, 12:16:30 PM »
 Shukriya Shikha ji icon_flower
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«Reply #8 on: August 10, 2015, 12:49:58 PM »
वाह वाह बहुत खूब,प्रभा प्रकाश जी ,हिरा शब्द में बड़ी ई मात्रा लगेगी यानि कि हीरा  Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 10, 2015, 10:47:43 PM »
Prabhaa Jee atee sunder rachnaa ke liye Rau (DUE)
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«Reply #10 on: August 11, 2015, 04:32:18 AM »
Shukriya Rastogi ji, Surindarn ji
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«Reply #11 on: August 11, 2015, 06:27:19 PM »
Quote from: surindarn on August 10, 2015, 10:47:43 PM
Prabhaa Jee atee sunder rachnaa ke liye Rau (DUE)
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Prabha Jee main ne aapke khaatey mein RAU jamaa kar diyaa hai, qabool keejiye.
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