तुम आओ तो बरसे सावन

by charanjit chandwal on June 25, 2011, 10:43:45 AM
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क्या सावन बरसेगा अबके
क्या होगा साजन से मिलन
देख देख राह थकी रे अखियाँ
तड़प तड़प जाये रे मोरा मन

नयनन  नीर बरस रहा रे
जियरा मोरा तरस रहा रे
धूप भयी बैरन अब तन की
झुलस रहा हाय रे मोरा मन

मेघदूत कोई आयेगा कब रे
प्रेम-संदेस मोरा लायेगा कब रे
दियो रे खबरिया उनको कोई
प्राण हरेगी जुलमी बिरहन

मन झूठे सपने है बुने रे
दोनो में कोई नाता सा लगे रे
सावन आये तो तुम आओ  
तुम आओ तो बरसे सावन
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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2011, 10:45:39 AM »

Very Nice Chandan Ji

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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2011, 10:49:26 AM »
क्या सावन बरसेगा अबके
क्या होगा साजन से मिलन
देख देख राह थकी रे अखियाँ
तड़प तड़प जाये रे मोरा मन

नयनन  नीर बरस रहा रे
जियरा मोरा तरस रहा रे
धूप भयी बैरन अब तन की
झुलस रहा हाय रे मोरा मन

मेघदूत कोई आयेगा कब रे
प्रेम-संदेस मोरा लायेगा कब रे
दियो रे खबरिया उनको कोई
प्राण हरेगी जुलमी बिरहन

मन झूठे सपने है बुने रे
दोनो में कोई नाता सा लगे रे
सावन आये तो तुम आओ 
तुम आओ तो बरसे सावन



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«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2011, 02:11:27 PM »
tum aao to barse saawan
mast kya khub likha hai....
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«Reply #4 on: June 26, 2011, 03:22:08 PM »
Charanjeet Jee Aadaab!

Waah janab waah kia khoob Geet likha hai aapne...
Dil ko chhu kar guzarte hai... Sabhi stanza ke ahsaas

bahut khoob daad daad daad Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile     

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