बड़ा दिलकश बड़ा मासूम...

by champak on April 11, 2013, 12:54:19 AM
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बड़ा दिलकश बड़ा मासूम है ये प्यार का मंजर,
मगर छोटी सी गलती भी बना देती इसे खंजर,
जो चुभ जाए अगर दिल में तो इक तूफ़ान आता है,
उजड़ जाती है दुनिया दिल की बन जाती जमीं बंजर !!

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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2013, 01:52:32 AM »
awesome champak ji
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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2013, 02:13:59 AM »
 Applause short and sweet...nice
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«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2013, 02:23:16 AM »
Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #4 on: April 11, 2013, 03:04:10 AM »
Quote from: champak on April 11, 2013, 12:54:19 AM


बड़ा दिलकश बड़ा मासूम है ये प्यार का मंजर,
मगर छोटी सी गलती भी बना देती इसे खंजर,
जो चुभ जाए अगर दिल में तो इक तूफ़ान आता है,
उजड़ जाती है दुनिया दिल की बन जाती जमीं बंजर !!

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nice
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«Reply #5 on: April 11, 2013, 03:38:31 AM »
Bahut khoob Champak jee, excellent.
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«Reply #6 on: April 11, 2013, 08:57:30 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: April 11, 2013, 09:12:27 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 11, 2013, 01:35:08 PM »
Quote from: champak on April 11, 2013, 12:54:19 AM


बड़ा दिलकश बड़ा मासूम है ये प्यार का मंजर,
मगर छोटी सी गलती भी बना देती इसे खंजर,
जो चुभ जाए अगर दिल में तो इक तूफ़ान आता है,
उजड़ जाती है दुनिया दिल की बन जाती जमीं बंजर !!

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«Reply #9 on: April 11, 2013, 08:01:36 PM »
Bahut Achchha Likhte Hai Champak Ji. Carry on. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: April 11, 2013, 08:11:59 PM »
good one
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