रुके रुके से अश्क

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किसी लम्हा तो अपनी यादों  को अलग कर मुझ से,
किसी लम्हा  तो कभी चैन से मुझ को, तू सो लेने दे,

उलझ चुका हूँ, ज़िंदगी के मसलों में इस तरह से अब,
खाव्बों में ही सही इस रात कुछ देर तो खुश हो लेने दें,

आज कह ही डालूं तुझे मैं दिल की बात मुझे लगता है,
मिल न पायेंगे कभी, सोच के जी भर अब तो रो लेने दे,

कि जो यूँ अब, यादों के सहारे ही कटनी है, जिंदगी बाकि,
तो चल, यूँ चंद गुजरी, सुनहरी, यादों के सपने, संजो लेने दे,

कोई, फ़ायदा नहीं, खामख्वाह, अब, उम्मीद लगाने से, फिर से,
होगा, बेहतर कि, उन रुके अश्ख़ों से, अब, आँखों को भिगो लेने दे !!
               
           
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«Reply #1 on: September 23, 2015, 10:56:41 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: September 23, 2015, 11:19:14 AM »
bohat umda waaaahhhh daaaaaddd
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«Reply #3 on: September 23, 2015, 11:28:02 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wah Kya baat hai.
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«Reply #4 on: September 23, 2015, 07:21:20 PM »
Very very nice rajji
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«Reply #5 on: September 24, 2015, 12:57:09 AM »
bahut umdah Raj Jee, dheron daad waaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: September 24, 2015, 04:46:35 AM »
Good one! It's Intense! I think 5th sher could be rewritten as it is similar to 3rd one!
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