लम्हा-लम्हा

by Dheeraj dave on February 05, 2013, 01:46:21 PM
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ओ लम्हा-लम्हा मिटने वाले हर एक धड़कन जीता जा
चाह जला कर नजर झुका ले और लबों को सीतां जा
देख जवानी तो जंगल है और बुढ़ापा बंजर होगा
बचपन यादों का दरिया है कतरा कतरा पीता जा
कौन कहेगा, कौन सुनेगा, तुझको,तेरी बातो को
मन को मन का मीत बना और मन ही मन में रीता जा
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«Reply #1 on: February 05, 2013, 02:35:04 PM »
Nice
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«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2013, 07:41:47 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: February 05, 2013, 08:49:20 PM »
Behtarrreeeeeeeeeeeeeen, bahut khoob, excellent Dheeraj jee. Iss ghazal ko aur aage badhaaiye. Khair bahut bahut mubarakbaad aur ek Rau meri taraf se qubool kijiye.
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«Reply #4 on: February 06, 2013, 02:29:30 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyavvad sabko yaar lekin rau ka matlab kya hai
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«Reply #5 on: February 06, 2013, 02:45:52 AM »
Bahut khoob..
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«Reply #6 on: February 06, 2013, 04:05:37 AM »
waah waah
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«Reply #7 on: February 07, 2013, 01:25:52 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: February 07, 2013, 07:41:55 PM »
bahut bahut dhanyavvad sabko yaar lekin rau ka matlab kya hai
Rau ka matlab yahaaN pe ek point hota hai jo koi rachna zyaadah pasand aane pe log kisi ko dete haiN.

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