वो पहाड़ों की तरह कटते जो सारे थे वो दिन

by charanjit chandwal on November 05, 2011, 01:17:39 PM
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याद आते हैं वो तेरे संग गुजारे थे जो दिन
क्या हसीं रातें थीं कितने प्यारे प्यारे थे वो दिन
 
बे-वफ़ाईयों के मुझे इल्ज़ाम देके रूठना
वो पहाड़ों की तरह कटते जो सारे थे वो दिन
 
कुछ तेरा मिज़ाज़ सख्त पे कुछ मेरी गुस्ताखियां
रौनक तेरे चेहरे पे देखने को हारे थे वो दिन
 
मोहब्बतों भरे वो खत लिखे जो रात रात भर
कागज़ो और कैनवसों पे जो उतारे थे वो दिन
 
‘ चंदन’ रहे अहसानमंद  सूरज का तो रहे जहां  
 अपने तो तेरे रूप निखरे   ने निखारे थे वो दिन
 
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«Reply #1 on: November 06, 2011, 06:09:00 PM »
Charanjeet Jee Aadaab!

Behad khoob aur damdar kalaam se nawaaza hai janab..
Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe.. Usual Smile

Kafi achche ahsaas O khayaaloN ko kalam baNd kiya hai
aapne.. Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Bus KahiN kahiN hume aisa laga ke aapka radiff aapki
bayaani ko hard kar gaya hai par aapne kafi achcha nibhaya
hai.. Usual Smile

likhate rahiye. Janab aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khuda hafez.. Usual Smile     

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