स्नेह सेतु है अनदेखा ********

by sana Afroz on November 14, 2014, 09:56:09 AM
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नयन हमारे पीर तुम्हारी,
    अश्रु की अविरल रेखा।
मेरे ह्रदय से तेरे ह्रदय तक,
    स्नेह सेतु है अनदेखा।।।।

बदल नहीं सकता है चाहे,
    जितना यत्न प्रयत्न करो।
हाथ पर और मस्तक पर सबके,
    भाग्य का है लेखा जोखा।।।।

क्षीण हो रही मर्यादाएं,
    टूट रहे आदर्श यहाँ।
ऐसे देश का और समाज का ,
    सपना किसने कब देखा।।।।

होश खो रहे जोश में देखो,
    युवक युवतियां देश की।
पश्चिम की इस भेड़चाल में,
    नहीं कोई लक्ष्मण रेखा।।।।।
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«Reply #1 on: November 14, 2014, 10:42:40 AM »
Mohtarma sana Afroz sahiba!

ager aap isay roman urdu/hindi men pesh ker saken tu hum bhi parh saken gay... wo kya hay k hamari nazar kuch kamzor hay..

dua-ga
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«Reply #2 on: November 14, 2014, 10:46:08 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut khub sanaji.....
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«Reply #3 on: November 14, 2014, 11:21:11 AM »
Shukriya vb shb ....

. Lijiye ye kavita roman Hindi Mein pesh hai...

nayan hamarey peer tumhari,
ashru Ki aviral rekha.

tere hriday se mere hriday tak
sneh setu hai andekha.

badal nahin sakta hai chahe,
jitna yatn prayatn karo.

hath pe aur mastak par sabke,
bhagya ka hai lekha jokha

cheer ho rahi maryadayein,
toot rahein aadarsh yahan.

aise desh ka aur samaj ka,
sapna kisne kab dekha.

hosh kho rahein josh Mein dekho,
yuvak yuvtiyan desh ke.

pashchim Ki is bheerchaal Mein,
nahin koi lakshman rekhaa....
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«Reply #4 on: November 14, 2014, 01:26:05 PM »
waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: November 14, 2014, 02:56:36 PM »
Mohtarma sana Afroz sahiba!

hindi alfaz ki chashni se bharpoor, aap ki ye nazm parhi aur lutf-andoz huay... aap k shukr-guzaar hen k aap ne zehmat uthai aur roman men bhi isay pesh kia...

hum maafi k talab-gaar bhe hen. jis ki waja ye hay k hum, hindi ki samajh nahi rakhtay... agar hamen ilm hota k is men hindi alfaz hen tu aap se ye derkhwast na kerty...

zaahir hay k hindi alfaz ki apni khushbu hay, aur apni chashni aur rang hay... aur hum is ko samajhnay ki nemat se mehroom hen...

omeed hay k hamaari muazerat qabool ki jayay ge...


dua-go
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«Reply #6 on: November 14, 2014, 03:35:26 PM »
Shukriya !!!! VB shb ....koi baat nahin ..
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«Reply #7 on: November 14, 2014, 04:01:26 PM »
waah waah waah bahut umdah peshkash hai, dheron daad.
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«Reply #8 on: December 04, 2014, 01:23:10 PM »
Shukriya!!!!!! Surindan ji..
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