Ajj Kayun...........

by palkhi on June 12, 2008, 07:03:14 PM
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Kinni War Tinu Dasaya Si Mein Appre Dil Da Haal,
Kinni War Tinu Samjhawa Mein Appri Majboori,
Jado Andhi Si Teri Yaad, Tha Ansoon Nadhi Di Tarah Bendhai Na,
Jado Andhi Si Teri Yaad, Oh Din Yaad Andha Si Jado Kitha Si Main Apprai Pyar Da Izhaar, Or Kar Ditha Tu Inkaar,
Ajj Kayun Aya Weh Merai Kol, Ajj Kayun Roohnda Weh Merai Samrai,
Mein Tha Usse Din Tinu Keh Ditha Si, Wi Agli Waar Mila Ga Tu Meri Laash Naal,
Pir Kayun Ajj Roohda Weh Meri Kabar Tha Bai Keh......

   ........This is my first poem in punjabi.......so plzzzz forgive me for my mistakes.................hope u all like it............
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2008, 07:32:13 PM »
wadiya shadiya likhiya ji... per achanak punjabi??
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palkhi
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«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2008, 08:29:54 PM »
bas dil kitha vi punjabi vich vi likhyai......

     ghar mein punjabi bhi bolthai hai......
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syednaami
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«Reply #3 on: July 11, 2008, 07:37:46 PM »
Oye,,, mainun te aj pata chaliya tuseen to bada changa likhya aye,,, jadon vi likho bas saanun das dena ki Punjabi ch nayi poem likhi aye...

Rab Rakha...
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palkhi
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«Reply #4 on: July 11, 2008, 07:48:09 PM »
Teinku Ji........ agli waar das dehsa....... tongue3:P
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syednaami
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«Reply #5 on: July 12, 2008, 03:11:08 AM »
aaho jee,,, main twade poem da intazaar karsaan...
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Nadaan Alone
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«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2009, 06:25:44 AM »
hmmmm....good ...
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