armana da ghar

by nikki on May 20, 2009, 07:13:41 AM

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nikki

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Meri ik koshish...hope u all like it!

kinni shiddat de naal ghar ikk banaya si
tinka tinka sadran a lae ke main isnu sajaya si

isde har kone ch main ikk aas nu rakhiya si
har vele main iss khoaban de ghar nu dil diyan akhan naal takiya si

pata nahi kisdi maadi nazar lagg gayi insu
jehda ajj eh tabah ho giya

meriyan sadran da phul sukk ke hava ho giya
mereyan armana da deep bujhiya te ghupp hanera ho giya

hun baithi sochdi haan
eh kisde dil di agg si
jisde naal mera basera sad ke soah ho giya


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jaindost

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Re: armana da ghar

«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2009, 07:18:03 AM »

good one nikki......


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K Lakhian

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Re: armana da ghar

«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2009, 07:20:12 AM »

Quote from: nikki on May 20, 2009, 07:13:41 AM

Kya baat hai


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Rajbir

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Re: armana da ghar

«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2009, 07:22:36 AM »

Niks,

Wah ! kya baat hai Applause

Bade dina baad darshan hoye ne ! Usual Smile

Kumbhkaran jaag gaya...vadaiyan NaNaNa


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nikki

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Re: armana da ghar

«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2009, 07:32:30 AM »

Thanx bro and thank you K Lakhiyan G.

mainu ajj vi yaad hai oh vela
jadon patiya di seeti bana ke
darvajiyan te dholki bajayi di si

har vele nikki-2 gallte pange laide si
te ghardiyan ton kutt khaidi si

oh ghar jithe baith ke duniya di har shai bhull jayidi si
oh kandhan, oh kothe, oh dehlijan oh darvaje

oh sawarg varge supne
pata nahi ajj kal o sabb kithe kho giya


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Sammual

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Re: armana da ghar

«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2009, 07:52:01 AM »

Bahut Khoob Nikki Ji. Applause


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nikki

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Re: armana da ghar

«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2009, 07:58:36 AM »

Thank u Jaindost and Sammual ji. Tussi vi kuch likhde tan changa lagda.


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pandit

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Re: armana da ghar

«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2009, 08:04:21 AM »

Quote from: nikki on May 20, 2009, 07:13:41 AM

KYA BAAT HAI NIKKI...


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k.shael

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Re: armana da ghar

«Reply #8 on: May 20, 2009, 08:05:36 AM »

Bahut khoob Nikki Ji, Kaafi der baad dekhya tuhanu.

Na pucho ki mere dil di taqleef ki hai,
Ek wajood to siwa mere kol bachya ki hai,

Oh ghar, Oh pind te oh galiyaan meriyaan chut gaye sab,
Hun ek chote jihe kamre to ilawa mere kol hai ki hai,

Jado wela si rishtya nu nibhaun da odo doori paa li,
Sach dasso loko Paise ne jhagdya to siwa ditta ki hai,

Na maa da pyaar riha na baapu di fatkaar,
Iss tarah kallepan wich rehna te jeena ki hai.

Shally.


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pandit

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Re: armana da ghar

«Reply #9 on: May 20, 2009, 08:08:50 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on May 20, 2009, 08:05:36 AM

KYA BAAT HAI SHALLY..
BAHUT KHOOB..


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Rajbir

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Re: armana da ghar

«Reply #10 on: May 20, 2009, 08:21:56 AM »

Nawab ji,

Very good ! Applause

Keep going Both Thumbs Up


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: armana da ghar

«Reply #11 on: May 20, 2009, 08:44:55 AM »

Bohat khoob ise meri kismat kahu ya tumhare lafzo ka jadu mujhe punjabi itni nahi aati par jab yeh kalam padha to aisa laga mano main urdu padh raha hu.....just amazing work.

Isde har kone wich main aas nu rakhiya si....uffff kitni khoobsurat line hain yeh.


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Talat

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Re: armana da ghar

«Reply #12 on: May 20, 2009, 10:42:34 AM »

My comments same as Sajid Bhai.....Punjabi nahin aati..par yahan padh ke laga hi nahin,.... Bohot pyara likha hai Nikki Sis


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saru8448

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khan koi aisa

«Reply #13 on: May 31, 2009, 05:59:20 AM »

khan koi aisa mila;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
jisa par dil luta dete;;;;;;;;;;;;;
har ek ne dhokha diya;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
kis-kis ko bhula dete;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
dil ka dard dil me hi chupaya hai;;;;;;;;;;
karte byan to mahaphil ko rula dete;;;;;;;;;;;;;;saru;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;


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saru8448

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Re: armana da ghar

«Reply #14 on: May 31, 2009, 06:04:50 AM »

cehare pe meri aansuon ki lakira ban gayi;;;;;;;;;;
soci nahi thi aisi apni taqdeer ban gayi;;;;;;;;;
maine to yun hi ret pe ungaliyan pheri thi;;;;;;;;;
na jane kaise unaki tasaveer ban gayi;;;;;;;;;;;