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«Reply #135 on: May 31, 2006, 09:47:25 AM » |
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too gud sis...n Skumar ji....thanx a million sis n Skumar ji..
kaon kehnda ki bhulayi baithe aa
assin tan sajna yaari tere naal layi baithe aa
tainu dil ch vasaya hai dhadkana vang
hun tan apni jind tere naam layi baithe aa
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«Reply #136 on: June 01, 2006, 08:04:23 AM » |
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Niky thanks... u r most welcome niku... bahut sohna likhya hai  Hathan vechu gir gayea lakiren kitey bhul ahey asi apni takdeera kitey jey kidhrey miley tuhanu tey chak leyna meyrey hissey di her khusi apney hathaan vech seja leyna too gud sis...n Skumar ji....thanx a million sis n Skumar ji..
kaon kehnda ki bhulayi baithe aa
assin tan sajna yaari tere naal layi baithe aa
tainu dil ch vasaya hai dhadkana vang
hun tan apni jind tere naam layi baithe aa |
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«Reply #137 on: June 01, 2006, 02:04:11 PM » |
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wowww bahut hi pyara likhiya sis....n thanx
je assin takdeeran vata sakde tan vata lainde
apni khushi tainu de dinde
tere gum apne naa laa lainde
par afsos eh ho nahi sakda
main hun rona tere layi zindagi bhar
kyonki hun tu mera ho nahi sakda
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«Reply #138 on: June 01, 2006, 02:45:57 PM » |
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The Style Guru Says........
Thanx everyone 4 appreciation!!!!
Gr8 work by all
Arz kitta si.....
Vakhre subha de sade sajan payare,
Kadi gussa jeha aanda kadi lagan piyare,
Gal guseh wali karde-Gussa aan vi na dinde,
Pehle dil taur dinde phir ron vi na dinde..........
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«Reply #139 on: June 01, 2006, 02:50:57 PM » |
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nice one again Style_guru ji..n thanx
rab ton thodi jahi mahulat lai aayi aa
vekh lai mere vall mukh karke
main tere layi hi aayi aa
je hun vi tu na boliya
na tu raaz apne dil da kholiya
tan assan turr jaana
fer na aakhin dassiya nahi si
hun sajna assan ehna galliya ch mud nahi aaona
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«Reply #140 on: June 01, 2006, 03:06:52 PM » |
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The Style Guru Says.......
My pleasure Nikki Ji!!!!
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«Reply #141 on: June 01, 2006, 03:08:34 PM » |
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na ji pleasure is all mine...tusi saare contribute karde o likhan ch
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«Reply #142 on: June 03, 2006, 03:07:57 AM » |
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wah ji nikki sonu n style guru..... bahut sohna dosto.... jwab nahi tuhada.....
jehde hasde ne bahuta O dilo bhare hunde ne
ohna ishqe ch fatt bade jare hunde ne
Nit mehfalan jamande sare jagg nu hasande
Par kehda jane andro kive mare hunde ne...
bachpan di gali te gawand na o bhulde
khed de si kali jota oh tha na bhulde
asi apniya khushiyan nu tere to vaarde rahe
muthi vich si jota kali keh ke haarde rahe.....
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«Reply #143 on: June 07, 2006, 03:03:09 AM » |
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koi apna hove ja gair hove
rabba kise te na eh kehar hove
yaar vichhre na kade vi yaar kolo
o jeena ki jo yaar ton bagair hove......
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«Reply #144 on: June 07, 2006, 07:30:34 AM » |
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The Style Guru Says........
Thanx Nikki Ji & Kumar Bro......
Arz kitta si,
Aiven rus ke na sathon mukh mod sajna,
Sada tere to bagair kehra hor sajna,
Sachha yaar hi ta rab de saman hunda ae,
Sohne fullan naal hi kandeya da maan hunda ae....
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«Reply #145 on: June 07, 2006, 01:48:16 PM » |
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too good Style_guru ji n Skumar ji...n thanx a lot
kisse da hassa kisse de jee da janjaal ho giya
jo sochiya nahi si oh saade naal ho giya
kade khuli hawa ch sah lainde si assin vi
hun tan lagda rabb vi hawa to kangaal ho giya
na hawa chaldi hai na sah aaonda hai
na dil jud_da hai...na jodan vale nu saade ghar da rah aaonda hai
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«Reply #146 on: June 07, 2006, 05:16:55 PM » |
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well done all...
here is my choti ji koshis
kyu lare chuthe la ke sanu, khuaban de vich pa dita
asin kush si apani dunia ton, kyu dil nu dukhan vich pa ditta
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«Reply #147 on: June 07, 2006, 05:22:02 PM » |
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thanx a lot Strange ji..n very nice
dil laon vele sochiya nahi si
eh sauda mehnga paina aa
dil de boote nu sadhra da paani deke
hun saanu har vele jaan nu sooli te tangna paina aa
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«Reply #148 on: June 08, 2006, 07:05:56 AM » |
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niku thanks... u r welcome... bahuta sohna likhya hai tovi:) jis tey sadi ankha ney moti bechaey rat bhar bheyjiya ohhee kagez usnu asi lekhiya... kuch vi nahi.... wowww bahut hi pyara likhiya sis....n thanx
je assin takdeeran vata sakde tan vata lainde
apni khushi tainu de dinde
tere gum apne naa laa lainde
par afsos eh ho nahi sakda
main hun rona tere layi zindagi bhar
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«Reply #149 on: June 08, 2006, 07:11:34 AM » |
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nikey tey style ji.. bahut sohna likhiya hia dova ney...
hur ek sham di dehleez tey
baithey rahey oh dair tak
ankhaan nal galaan kitiya bahut
muh tu.. kuch vi nahi keya
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