Dil Diyan Dil Vich Reh Gaiyan -Panna 2:Pain in Love : Punjabi poetry

Pooja

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«Reply #15 on: August 02, 2005, 04:05:10 PM »

bahoot khoob bahoot khoob bahoot kamal.....wah wah wah.......nikki and Aryaan ji bahoot hi acha likha hai app dono ne.....

kinwe najra chukka, kiwen ro ke dikhawan
wo jo na ayya murr kar wapis, kinwe duniya nu batawaan
ve le chale manu berry, kinwen kisi hor da churra pawaan
le le ankhiri salam tu mera, hun is jahar naal mai apni jindagi mitawaan!!!!


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nikki

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Dil Diyan Dil Vich Reh Gaiyan

«Reply #16 on: August 02, 2005, 04:06:05 PM »

thank u Dolly sis.....tuhada bahut bahut shukriya ji........................long time no see ...kithe rehnde ho tussi?


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Aryaan

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Dil Diyan Dil Vich Reh Gaiyan

«Reply #17 on: August 02, 2005, 04:17:26 PM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

Thanx Pooja.. aur aap ne bhi khoob likha....


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Pooja

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Dil Diyan Dil Vich Reh Gaiyan

«Reply #18 on: August 02, 2005, 04:19:05 PM »

Shukariyaan Aryaan ji............................................... ...


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nikki

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Dil Diyan Dil Vich Reh Gaiyan

«Reply #19 on: August 03, 2005, 05:13:43 PM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

thanx a lot Pooja sis....aur aapne bhi bahut hi kamaal likha hai


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Re: Dil Diyan Dil Vich Reh Gaiyan

«Reply #20 on: August 28, 2005, 09:26:42 AM »

Quote from: "nikki"

Hope you all like it...I will try my best to explain the difficult words.

dil diyan dil vich reh gaiyan
sadhran(desires) hanju(tear) ban ke veh gaiyan

jo gal zubaan keh na saki sadiyan ton
oh pal vich akhiyan keh gaiyan

jinha(those) assan(hopes) te assin jeende si
oh assan bin teel(oil) de dive(earthenpot) ban ke reh gaiyan

jehriyan gallan nu assin seene ch dabayi rakhiya
jinha te assin sabar da pehra layi rakhiya
oh duniyan waliyan diyan zubaana keh gaiyan

sadi zindagi mitti di paid(feet mark) si
hun samayein de naal-2
eh paidan fikiyan(light) paye gaiyan

dil diyan dil vich reh gaiyan...

*inspiration taken from punjabi song ....dil diyan dil vich reh gaiyan*

excelent ...... very well written ... choti ... loki jag vich vaste bathre punjabiya di shaan vakhri ...

akkhin neer layi baithaa haan
teri tasveer layi baithaa haan

maran waala peerh ki jaane
jigraan teer layi baithaa haan

mushkaan husn rawaani waala
dadhaa peer layi baithaa haan

bulhaan te farzi muskaanan
seene peeRh layi baithaa haan

dil raanjhanh di masti khaatir
botal heer layi baithaa haan

tainu dosh ki dewaan yaara
bad taqdeer layi baithaa haan !!!


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nikki

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Dil Diyan Dil Vich Reh Gaiyan

«Reply #21 on: August 28, 2005, 05:06:53 PM »

wah ji wah tuhada te javaab nahi..Humtum...

ek umeed jo assin uss kolo kitti
na pucho fer saade te ki beeti

haath khali reh gaye..
jholi gum pae gaye

akhiyan ch hanju, te dil vich tadap
sada haal tan mandra hoiya hi
assin bejaan jahe ho ke reh gaye..

koi dasse sada kasoor ki si
assan jo mohabbat ek bedardi naal kitti

oh apne rahe chala gaya
assin te kisse rah te turan joge vi nahi reh gaye


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«Reply #22 on: August 28, 2005, 06:38:21 PM »

wow nikki sis and aryaan,kya kamaal ka likha hai.......pehli baar mujhe punj poetry pasand aayi hai :lol: .Too good pooja ji and all.


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nikki

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Dil Diyan Dil Vich Reh Gaiyan

«Reply #23 on: August 29, 2005, 01:24:11 PM »

thanx Nidhi sis........................ Usual Smile


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nikki

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Dil Diyan Dil Vich Reh Gaiyan

«Reply #24 on: March 29, 2006, 03:24:01 PM »

loki saade te hasde ne
dekho laggiya valiya da haal

hun kive samjhavan lokan nu
kujh sadiyan majburiyan si
kujh tu vi nahi chaliya naal


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nikki

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Dil Diyan Dil Vich Reh Gaiyan

«Reply #25 on: March 30, 2006, 09:19:58 AM »

saade dil da rog gairan da hassa ho giya
ohnu kithe labhan jawan
jehda duniya di bheed ch kite kho giya


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waheed_rose2004

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Dil Diyan Dil Vich Reh Gaiyan

«Reply #26 on: March 30, 2006, 11:43:58 AM »

very nice work Nikki................... :lol:


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jugnu

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Dil Diyan Dil Vich Reh Gaiyan

«Reply #27 on: March 30, 2006, 12:23:31 PM »

Quote from: "nikki"

saade dil da rog gairan da hassa ho giya
ohnu kithe labhan jawan
jehda duniya di bheed ch kite kho giya

Tussi bahut vadiya likhya nikki ji !!

ASSI TAN HAR SAMAY TERE NAAL SI,
PAR TUSSI KADE VEKHIYA HI NAHI,
RAAHVAN TAK LAIYAN SAARIYAN TUSSI,
KADE APNI PARCHAI NU VEKHYAI NAHI !!


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nikki

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Dil Diyan Dil Vich Reh Gaiyan

«Reply #28 on: March 30, 2006, 02:07:36 PM »

thanx Waheed n Jugnu...toooo gud Jugnu..

je saade labhiya tu labh jaanda
tan assin tainu khona hi nahisi
je rokiya rukk jaanda tan
ajj assin ikale beh rona hi nahi si


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Dil Diyan Dil Vich Reh Gaiyan

«Reply #29 on: March 30, 2006, 03:23:43 PM »

Nice all !!

Sach hai ke Dil diya dil vich rahengiya
lab khamosh ne par ankhiya kehngiya
Tere bajo ki hovega haal mera soniye
mar javage te ankha khuliya rehngiya !!!


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