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«Reply #150 on: June 08, 2006, 07:15:11 AM » |
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bahut bahut mehrbani Skumar ji... tusi vi bahut sohna likhya hai... wonderful.... do char din di gal hia dil khak vech mil jauga aag tey jado kagez rakhiya baqeee bachaya... kuch vi nahi!!!! wah ji nikki sonu n style guru..... bahut sohna dosto.... jwab nahi tuhada.....
jehde hasde ne bahuta O dilo bhare hunde ne
ohna ishqe ch fatt bade jare hunde ne
Nit mehfalan jamande sare jagg nu hasande
Par kehda jane andro kive mare hunde ne...
bachpan di gali te gawand na o bhulde
khed de si kali jota oh tha na bhulde
asi apniya khushiyan nu tere to vaarde rahe
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«Reply #151 on: June 08, 2006, 02:40:56 PM » |
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wowww sis kamaal da likhiya...n thanx a lot
jo dil ch aaya keh ditta
assin baaki kuch vi nahi rehan ditta
jadon uss kolon jawaab mangiya
ohne kiha..koi jawaab hai hi nahi
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«Reply #152 on: June 09, 2006, 03:33:27 AM » |
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Thanks niku... bahut sohna likhiya hia.... wonderful.... kesi vi dard nu hadd to guzeren nahi dayeeda teyra pyar meni bikharna nahi deynda teyre baddh yea dil zidi bahut hu gaya hai kesi vi shaks nu khudh vech utran nahi deynda wowww sis kamaal da likhiya...n thanx a lot
jo dil ch aaya keh ditta
assin baaki kuch vi nahi rehan ditta
jadon uss kolon jawaab mangiya
ohne kiha..koi jawaab hai hi nahi |
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«Reply #153 on: June 09, 2006, 08:41:23 AM » |
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nikki n sonu ji ......kya baat hai....
bahut sohna likheya hai.... jwab nahi tuhada..
nale sonu ji tuhada avatar ki keh reha hai...
don't go away... just stay here n write as always....
:D :D :D
Jehre hasde ne bahuta O dilon bhare hunde ne
Ohna ishqe ch fatt bade jare hunde ne
nit mehfalan jamaunde sare jagg nu hasande
Par kehda jaane andron kive mare hunde ne...
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«Reply #154 on: June 09, 2006, 08:46:00 AM » |
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thanx Skumar ji n Sonu sis..n very nice both of u..
jihnu lage oh hi jaane
jisne aap satt khaadi hove
oh hi kise da dukh pehchane....
je mainu pyar na hunda
tan mere layi begana eh sansaar na hunda
tu vi apna lagda na
je dil mera tere layi dhadkda na
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«Reply #155 on: June 12, 2006, 05:08:59 AM » |
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SKumar ji thanks... bahut bahut shukriya... avtar tey na jaow jado tak saa heygey ney asi kithey jana hai asi ehtey hi haan sukamr ji tusi chinta na kro.... tusi sadi phiker kiti ena hi kafi hai badi mehrebani janab sadey avtar tey gaour pharmaan da  ... skumar ji bahut sohna likhya hia tusi... log ishq kerkey bahut khush rehndey ney shyed unaha nu peta nahi ki ishq anjam mout to ghat nahi hunda nikki n sonu ji ......kya baat hai....
bahut sohna likheya hai.... jwab nahi tuhada..
nale sonu ji tuhada avatar ki keh reha hai...
don't go away... just stay here n write as always....
:D :D :D
Jehre hasde ne bahuta O dilon bhare hunde ne
Ohna ishqe ch fatt bade jare hunde ne
nit mehfalan jamaunde sare jagg nu hasande
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«Reply #156 on: June 12, 2006, 05:13:17 AM » |
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Niku thanks... to vi ghat nahi hia kudey ahgh la deyni haan bahut sohna likhya hia.... tusi dova ney... kheynda si oh ki meyri khushi vastey kuch vi ker jaouga jey kidhrey ahkha vech hanju angey tey duniya to ledh jaouga ki sochia si key oh hi meyrey hanjoyaa da karen ben jaouga :cry: thanx Skumar ji n Sonu sis..n very nice both of you..
jihnu lage oh hi jaane
jisne aap satt khaadi hove
oh hi kise da dukh pehchane....
je mainu pyar na hunda
tan mere layi begana eh sansaar na hunda
tu vi apna lagda na
je dil mera tere layi dhadkda na |
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«Reply #157 on: June 12, 2006, 08:22:59 AM » |
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nikki ji n sonu ji...bahut 2 shukriya... bahut hi sohna likheya hai tusi dona ne.... marvellous....
nale sonu ji chinta ta hundi hai jado tuhade varge dost chad ke jan...
islayi keha si ke jan di gal na karo.... tusi dove bahut hi sohna likhde ho ... so eho jahe dosta nu main bhala kida jan de sakda...
Ki puchde ho karan akhiyon vagde pani da
mera vi hai ik patar yaaro prem kahani da
tahniyo tute full akhir murjha hi jande ne
ki kaha dil da haal bas sajjan chete aa hi jande ne...
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«Reply #158 on: June 13, 2006, 06:30:28 AM » |
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Skumar ji your most welcome.... bahut bahut shukirya tuhada tuhanu sadi tuty phuti shayri vi passend ahye...tusi sanu apna dost samjhiya sadi fiker kiti bahut mehrbani tuhadi.... yea taan bus tuhadey luka daa pyar hai jeyda meynu ehtey kich key ley anda hia... dil di gala lafja vech bayan ker janda hai.... kambakhat dil mudiya vi nahi mudhda her veyley dostaa nu hi yaad kerda hai..... bahut sohna likhiya hia tusi Skumar ji... Muskura do zara khuda dey vastey sama-e-mehefil vech roshni ghat hai tusi sadey nahi tey koi gum nahi asi tuhadey haan eh vi koi ghat nahi? nikki ji n sonu ji...bahut 2 shukriya... bahut hi sohna likheya hai tusi dona ne.... marvellous....
nale sonu ji chinta ta hundi hai jado tuhade varge dost chad ke jan...
islayi keha si ke jan di gal na karo.... tusi dove bahut hi sohna likhde ho ... so eho jahe dosta nu main bhala kida jan de sakda...
Ki puchde ho karan akhiyon vagde pani da
mera vi hai ik patar yaaro prem kahani da
tahniyo tute full akhir murjha hi jande ne
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«Reply #159 on: June 13, 2006, 08:44:41 AM » |
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sonu ji bahut bahut shukriya.... es dosti nu inz hi salamat rakhna..... dosta da fikar ta hamesha hi is jaan nu rehnda hai..... tusi vi mudna na te dosta nu yaad rakhna...
dosti de naam te kuj arj hai ji....
Baapu da gussa te nani da pyaar,
Veera de sir utte sardari te choteya da ditta satkaar,
schoole kitian sharartan te teacheran to pai maar
mere college wale velly te ohna nal kitian gallan chaar
maarde hunde si roundiyan ho ke motor cycle te swaar
karde hunde si comment kudiyan nu ikathe ho ke yaar
ajj vi chete aundiyan oh sohniya soortan te mere jigri 'YAAR'
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«Reply #160 on: June 15, 2006, 12:57:51 PM » |
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The Style Guru Says........
Thanx every1 & Gr8 work Sonu Ji, Nikki Ji & Kumar Ji.......
Arz Kitta si,
Hanju saadi takdeer,
Assi hanjuan de vich rul jana,
Asin umaran tak tuhanu yaad rakhna,
Par tusi hauli hauli bhul jana........
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«Reply #161 on: June 16, 2006, 04:10:28 AM » |
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Skumar ji your most welcome... asi dosta nu nahi bhuldey hana bahvey apney app nu bhul jaheyeh... bahut bahut mehrbani sadi fiker karen vastey... asi nahi muddey tusi beyfiker rahow... bahut acha likhiya hia tusi... dosta da oh milna oh gappa marna oh hasna kheynda ajj vi vheyta and hai meynu... teyra rusna tey phir meyra manana aj vi cheytey ahunda hai kadey kesi nu satna tey phir evi hi cheyd jana sanu bahut hasanada hai teyra oh rus key phir meynu manana ajj vi ceytey ahunda hai sonu ji bahut bahut shukriya.... es dosti nu inz hi salamat rakhna..... dosta da fikar ta hamesha hi is jaan nu rehnda hai..... tusi vi mudna na te dosta nu yaad rakhna...
dosti de naam te kuj arj hai ji....
Baapu da gussa te nani da pyaar,
Veera de sir utte sardari te choteya da ditta satkaar,
schoole kitian sharartan te teacheran to pai maar
mere college wale velly te ohna nal kitian gallan chaar
maarde hunde si roundiyan ho ke motor cycle te swaar
karde hunde si comment kudiyan nu ikathe ho ke yaar
ajj vi chete aundiyan oh sohniya soortan te mere jigri 'YAAR' |
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«Reply #162 on: June 16, 2006, 04:15:12 AM » |
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Style Guru ji your most welcome... thanks Style ji.... maniya hanjow nal likhi sadi takdeer hai jenu na miliya koi sath ek pati purani ketab hai bhavey lakh hunn muskila asi bhuldey nahi dostaan nu maren to baad vi dil cheer key veykh leyna tuhanu dostaa da naa hi miluga jes khadi asi bhul javangey dostaan nu oh gadi saa chalna band hu jana The Style Guru Says........
Thanx every1 & Gr8 work Sonu Ji, Nikki Ji & Kumar Ji.......
Arz Kitta si,
Hanju saadi takdeer,
Assi hanjuan de vich rul jana,
Asin umaran tak tuhanu yaad rakhna,
Par tusi hauli hauli bhul jana........ |
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«Reply #163 on: June 18, 2006, 09:24:15 AM » |
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bahoot khoob style guru and Sonu
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«Reply #164 on: June 22, 2006, 03:00:29 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya sonu ji n style ji....
bahut sohna likheya hai tusi ji...... bahut sohna....
sonu ji dosti te bahut sohna likheya hai tusi.....
apni dosti de layi kuj arj hai.....
jra dyaan dena ji...
Thokran tan lagdiyan kul duniya nu
banda oh jo thokran jar jave
Unj har koi kehnda main soorma haan
banda oh jo mauke te khad jave
Marde garbru choti diyan mutiyaran te
Par gabru oh jehde te mutiyar mar jave
Bazi ishq di jittan de shokeen saare
Aashiq oh jo mashook layi har jave
Khushi vekh ke marjaane "suresh" di saar lain wale bahut saare
Yaar oh jo gam vekh khad jave.....
Mere dosta layi....... to u....
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