***Dil Udaas Hai***

by AVTAR RAYAT on April 22, 2010, 10:44:41 AM
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Dil Udhaas Hai Bahut...
Koyi Paigaam Likh Do,
Tum Apna Naam Na Likho...
Gum Hi Naam Likh Do,

Meri Kismat Mein...
Gam Aur Tanhayi Hai...Lekin,
Tamaam Umar Na Likho...
Magar Ek Shaam Hi Likh Do,

Ye Jaante Hein Ki Umar Bhar...
Tanha Mujhko Rehna Hai...
Magar...Pal Do Pal Hi,
Mere Naam Likh Do...!!!
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«Reply #1 on: April 22, 2010, 02:39:11 PM »
bahut khoob Avtar ji.... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 23, 2010, 12:32:01 AM »
Vry vll said.......
vry vry gud!!!!!!!

I think ur also punjabi ......
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«Reply #3 on: April 23, 2010, 03:23:48 AM »
Bahut khoob Avtar Ji
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«Reply #4 on: April 23, 2010, 03:42:49 AM »
Shukria Klaskar Ji,,,Neel Ji...Rajesh Ji...
Neel Ji Main Punjabi Hi Haa'n...
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«Reply #5 on: April 23, 2010, 03:49:31 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Avtar ji,fantastic creation.maza aa gayi padke.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #6 on: April 23, 2010, 03:50:44 AM »
Thanx Madhu Ji....
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