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"Doonghi Dil Wali Saanjh E" by Shally.

by k.shael on October 19, 2009, 12:56:04 PM

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k.shael

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Hai khabar menu ki tu kise hor di sougaat e,
Par mein tenu apna rabb manya eh mere dil di baat e,

Pyaar karda e koi taan kar len diyo yaaro,
Eh na pucho pyaar karan waliya nu ki teri kihdi jaat e,

Tere din ne nasiba wale tere mukhde wangu,
Sada kol taan marya hoya dil te gamma wali raat e,

Pyaar karna te nibhaouna koi sokhi gall ni,
Harde nahi aashik, koi khushi te koi gamm naal aabad e,

Unjh taan tera mera koi rishta nahi hai par,
Rabb jaanda ki meri tere naal doonghi dil waali sanjh e,

Shally.


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Sammual

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Re: ~~"Doonghi Dil Wali Saanjh E"~~ by Shally.

«Reply #1 on: October 20, 2009, 04:19:34 AM »

Wow Bahut Hi Wadiya Likheya Hai Shally Ji.Very Nice Clapping Smiley


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madhuwesh

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Re: ~~"Doonghi Dil Wali Saanjh E"~~ by Shally.

«Reply #2 on: October 20, 2009, 07:46:59 AM »

Bahut khoob Shally ji .poora kavita nahi samjhi par jitna samajh mein aayee kamaal ke hai. icon_thumleft


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Dalwara

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Re: ~~"Doonghi Dil Wali Saanjh E"~~ by Shally.

«Reply #3 on: October 21, 2009, 02:55:21 AM »

A very nice ghazal Shally!

Dalwara


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Roja

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Re: ~~"Doonghi Dil Wali Saanjh E"~~ by Shally.

«Reply #4 on: October 21, 2009, 03:05:25 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on October 19, 2009, 12:56:04 PM

Wah wah kya khoob likha hai tumne shally dear... bahut bahut khoob Applause


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Sager4u

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Re: ~~"Doonghi Dil Wali Saanjh E"~~ by Shally.

«Reply #5 on: October 24, 2009, 05:18:13 AM »

Shally ji maaf karna mujhe panjabi nahi aati hai but jitna samajha accha laga ji


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lovely_nancy

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Re: ~~"Doonghi Dil Wali Saanjh E"~~ by Shally.

«Reply #6 on: November 21, 2009, 06:13:12 PM »

awww


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: ~~"Doonghi Dil Wali Saanjh E"~~ by Shally.

«Reply #7 on: November 21, 2009, 07:01:13 PM »

Wah! Bahut khoob Shally Ji


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pankshivam

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Re: ~~"Doonghi Dil Wali Saanjh E"~~ by Shally.

«Reply #8 on: November 26, 2009, 08:44:15 PM »

Really Great Job Shallyji
Dil Ko Choo Liya Is Thread ne
This One is my Favorite One
Isi Tarah Likhte Rahiye
~Pank~


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shab

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Re: ~~"Doonghi Dil Wali Saanjh E"~~ by Shally.

«Reply #9 on: November 27, 2009, 02:17:11 AM »

k.shael ji bahut ache likhte ho


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lovely_nancy

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Re: ~~"Doonghi Dil Wali Saanjh E"~~ by Shally.

«Reply #10 on: January 03, 2010, 05:32:38 PM »

nyc...


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lovely_nancy

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Re: ~~"Doonghi Dil Wali Saanjh E"~~ by Shally.

«Reply #11 on: January 09, 2010, 02:13:43 AM »

wow............ Clapping Smiley


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