kaushish tainu bhul jaan di

by lovely_nancy on January 29, 2010, 01:08:02 AM
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please comment and suggest improvments:

Tenu yaad kar kar main royi,
kaushish ta bahut kiti tainu bhul jaan di,
par fer v teri yaad na gai,
tu ta sanu bhul geya,
kyu sanu aaj v dur gae sajan di yaad sataundi ae,
kini pata ohnu sanu ohdi kini lodh ae,
sari raat tadpa akha ch neend pehndi naa,
cha sade hanju ban dhul gae,
aaj asi apne aap toh nazaraan churaan toh majbur ho gae,
dukh ta neri ban sade te dul gae ne
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2010, 02:11:15 PM »
Nice One Nancy Ji
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