Keeven de assi yar ho gaye:Pain in Love : Punjabi poetry

lalit.sharma83

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Saada mehfilan vich jee nahi lagda, assi tanhaiyan de shikaar ho gaye,
Kalleyan rehan di aadat paa litti, Assi apne aap de hi yaar ho gaye,

Na khushi hon di khushi, Te na gam hon da gam, pata nahi keevein de assi yaar ho gaye,
Kalleyan rehan.....

Iklaape nal gallan karaniyan, naale shaunk likhan da paa litta,
Assi apni hi parchayee nu, apna hamdard bana litta,

Kis nal bolaan mai, te kis nal dukh-sukh kholan mai,
Aithe apna nazar koi aave na,

Jad yaad tu aaven taan akhaan band kar layiye
pher chete hor kuj aave na,

Teri yaad vich kalam chaldi e meri, Varna kalam te meri shabad koi aave na

Teriyan yaadan hi bas zindagi da hissa ne hun meri, Shayad ehi hun sadde vichar ho gaye,
Kalleyan rehan di aadat paa litti, Assi apne aap de hi yaar ho gaye!!!


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deepika_divya

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Re: Keeven de assi yar ho gaye

«Reply #1 on: March 13, 2009, 09:59:41 AM »

Wah wah Lajit ji .. kya mast likha hai . Punjabi jadu chala diya si...

Keep writing ....


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Re: Keeven de assi yar ho gaye

«Reply #2 on: March 13, 2009, 10:07:50 AM »

Waah, Kya Khoob Yaara,.
Kamaal Ka Likha Hai Aapne Lalit Ji,.
Bohat Achche Yunhi Likhte rahiye,.


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lalit.sharma83

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Re: Keeven de assi yar ho gaye

«Reply #3 on: March 13, 2009, 12:22:21 PM »

Shukriya mere anmol dosto,

Likhne ka to bahot man karta hai, lekin abhi achi tarahan se likhna nahi aata. Bahot koshish karta hoon tab jaa ke kahin thodi bahot lines teyaar hoti hain!

Well, I'll continue my efforts and will be back with something new happy9


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1nina1

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Re: Keeven de assi yar ho gaye

«Reply #4 on: March 15, 2009, 11:40:31 AM »

excellent work,u really pulled on my heart strings!
ninax Applause


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