main takdi rahi ...........:Pain in Love : Punjabi poetry

ranjana

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main takdi rahi tera rah sajana
tere kol ik kadam v chal ke aaya na gaya

main yuga tak rahi payasi tere bagair
karke vaada tere kolo nibhaya na gaya

zindi rahi main tere vaddeyan de nal
hoka pyar da tere kolo,ik v lagaya na gaya

tang reh gayi tenu ik var milan di
ve chandreya,tere kolo mul pyar da koi paya na gaya


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Rajbir

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main takdi rahi ...........

«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2006, 08:53:41 AM »

Ranju

kina sona ishq da dard byan kita ee !

Shabash ! enj he likhdi reh kudiye

Rajbir


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ranjana

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main takdi rahi ...........

«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2006, 09:09:13 AM »

shukriya Rajbir ji.......

isi taraha hosala dende ravo!


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Anushka

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Re: main takdi rahi ...........

«Reply #3 on: June 12, 2006, 10:14:20 AM »

Quote from: "ranjana"

bahut sona likhya ranjan...
Beutiful..

dil diya gela zubani izhar kitiyaa...
na meh jaan seku yeh tumhari peedaa
fakat ek gal kay meh bhi royaa
jaanch mainu aa gayi gam khaan di
holi holi ro ke ji parchaan di
changa hoya tu paraaya ho geye
muk gayi chinta hun tenu apnaan di


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ranjana

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main takdi rahi ...........

«Reply #4 on: June 12, 2006, 12:47:33 PM »

shukriya ANU.............

yeh gajal mujhe bhi bahut pasand hai ......Chitra and Jagjit singh ki awaz mein.........

o jadu juda hoye te tan vichu jaan kad ke le gaye
mere dil da sara qarar te aankha vich khumar kad ke le gaye
mein beath ke undiaan rava.n vichu kande chunadi rah gayi
te ao apni rava.n badal ke kisi aur de naal ho gaye

Anu dear koi spell mistake ho toh bata dena... Usual Smile


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nikki

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main takdi rahi ...........

«Reply #5 on: June 12, 2006, 04:18:51 PM »

suprebbb Ranjana di n Anushka...


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Anushka

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main takdi rahi ...........

«Reply #6 on: June 12, 2006, 09:41:52 PM »

Thx nikki yaar tu vi tey kuch likh.... karday dhemaka nikiiiiiiiiiii!!!


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