```pREEt gUMa dI ```:Pain in Love : Punjabi poetry

Naya_Daur

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Guma nal meri preet purani
Gum ne mere mud toh hani
Gum hi mere rishte-nate
Gum hi mere dil de jani

Gum main khawa gum main peewa
Guma di cha heth main jeewa
Gum badre mainu change lagde
Banke lahoo mere andhar wagde

Gum bagair mitti vich rul jao
Meri laadli jind neemani
Gum ne mere hasse-kherre
Vaasde sada mere char chuffere

Rowan main gum chup karlaunde
Saach zindagi da mainu samjhaunde
Do lafz vich mukh jaandi e
Meri zindagi ki sarri kahani

Jind dorri vich gum de maanke
Jad main turra khaan-khaan khaanke
Guma nu chad main kidar jawa
Gum hi han mera parchawan

Bina gum meri zindagi muk jaani
Guma nal hai meri preet puraani...!!!

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KUCH SAMJHAUN DI KOSHISH VICH HAN
DIL DI GAL LUKAN DI KOSHISH VICH HAN
MUKH TOH BHAWEIN HASSEYA NAHI JAANDA
PAR TERE MUH TE HASSA LAEYAN DI KOSHISH VICH HAN...[/color]


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Pooja

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```pREEt gUMa dI ```

«Reply #1 on: March 17, 2006, 05:51:24 PM »

wah kaya baat hai, app dil chu kar nahi ajj to dil ko rul kar chal diye!! bahoot hi acha likha hai!!!

mai punjabi mai nahi likhati, magar koshish ki hai... hindi aor punjabi mix hai... shayad apko pasand ayye:

Gum ke sath meri apni ek kahani
Sunati rahti hu, jisko mai, apni jubani

Gumo ki chah, gumo ki dhoop
Gumo ki barsaat, her ek iska roop
Manu lagdein hai gum itne payaare
Nahi aor koi mere sahaare

Uthty baithty , sungi mere sathi
Urati rahti hai inki yah andhi
Kadi mai urrdu, kadi mai giradi
Kadi subkati, kadi ho jandi ziddi

Kuch v kar lo, yah gum na mane
Inke bina kaise jiyu, yah dil na jaane

Gum ke sath meri apni ek kahani
Sunati rahti hu, jisko mai, apni jubani


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nikki

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```pREEt gUMa dI ```

«Reply #2 on: March 17, 2006, 05:59:01 PM »

wonderfull both of u....beautifull words


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Naya_Daur

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```pREEt gUMa dI ```

«Reply #3 on: March 17, 2006, 05:59:47 PM »

thnks ,for appreciating,, aur appki poem chahye,,hindi punjabi mix hai,lekin issme jo hidden meaning hai woh achhe tareeke is convey ho raha hai,, very nice :wink:

Quote from: "Pooja"


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Naya_Daur

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«Reply #4 on: March 17, 2006, 06:03:02 PM »

Quote from: "nikki"

wonderfull both of you....beautifull words

Thnks nikki,,,Par Tusi tan bhut sohni punjabi likhe ho,, post tan karde kuch,, je tusi post nahi kitti tan mera te pooja da saath kaun dewega,, :?:


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nikki

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```pREEt gUMa dI ```

«Reply #5 on: March 17, 2006, 06:09:50 PM »

I will reply very soon...aaj me not well, mind not working


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Naya_Daur

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```pREEt gUMa dI ```

«Reply #6 on: March 17, 2006, 06:17:17 PM »

Quote from: "nikki"

I will reply very soon...aaj me not well, mind not working

ok,,,,,I'll be waiting Usual Smile


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Rajbir

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```pREEt gUMa dI ```

«Reply #7 on: March 17, 2006, 07:35:04 PM »

Lao ji assi ethe vi aa gaye !

Tusi dono te chaa gaye !

Pooja da hun jhaaka khul gya e !

Hun isnu rokna bada mushkil e :D


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Pooja

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```pREEt gUMa dI ```

«Reply #8 on: March 17, 2006, 07:41:29 PM »

ha ha ha Veer ji ki gal kah di...

hath mere kanpan, te khud nu rona anda hai
jud v likhadi hai punjabi vich, dil mera thum sa janda hai
adat to hai majboor mai, shayra da dil rakhati hu
hun ta mera, gujraati vich v likhan nu man chahudan hai!!!

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guma da mela, man nu roke
mildein rahe dhoke hi dhoke
dard jisne is jind vich ghole
kayun osi nu dil ajj v hahunda hai
preet di larri, yah churani mushkil
ek hanju anda te ek janda hai!!!


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Naya_Daur

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```pREEt gUMa dI ```

«Reply #9 on: March 17, 2006, 08:11:55 PM »

Ek kudi nu sambhalo koi,
lassi pee ke talli hoi jaandi aa
punjabi tan ujaard deti ehne
hun gujaraati nu hath payi jaandi aa

HA HA HA,, DARD vich funny likh ho gaya,,sorry folks

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mood tan nahi c,, chalo kisse de kehn te likh hi denda han

Rabba ditta husn je tu sohneya nu
kaahnu dittiya tu magruriya ne
pehla patt ke putt baiganeya de
fer langhdiya vatt ke ghooriya ne
dil le ke yaar da den dhoka
dagabaaz mazzajna pooriya ne
je picho puchiye ni adiyeh eh ki kita
ta kehndiya chad ve adeyaa eh saadiyan majbooriya ne...!!!


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Pooja

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```pREEt gUMa dI ```

«Reply #10 on: March 17, 2006, 08:53:35 PM »

Maar maar ghar de chakkar, kurriyan nu chakkar de jaunde :oops:
Ajkal de put e jattan de, dil lagaun da khed kidan khed jaunde :evil:

Mila ke akhiyan, begani thee (beti) nal, pardes nu turr jaunde Puzzled !

ethe baithy o rasta vekhe, uthe goriyan nal gutrgoo kari jaunde :evil:

Pardes vich reh goriyan naal, majboori apni kahaunde glasses2

Wapas murr apne desh nu aake, sanu pichari hoi bataunde :evil:


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isha_verma7

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«Reply #11 on: March 17, 2006, 09:09:31 PM »

wah wah tusi sab toh chaa gaya......good work guyz....punjabi toh bahut acchi likhi par real meaning dil ko chuu gayaa....

jitni tareef karo kaam hai!!!!!!!


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nikki

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```pREEt gUMa dI ```

«Reply #12 on: March 18, 2006, 07:36:07 PM »

very nice Pooja sis...

meri ajj guma naal preet pai gayi
jad oh chad ke cahle gaye tan-
main ikali reh gayi

mainu hun ehsaas eh hunda hai
loki theek hi kende si pyar
paani de bulbule de samaan hai
jo dikhda sohna hai par isdi umr choti hundi hai

hun kaun samjhaye eh pathar dil waliya nu
eh preet ohi launda hai..eh dard ohi handaunda hai
jisnu yaar vich rabb nazar aonda hai


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Rajbir

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```pREEt gUMa dI ```

«Reply #13 on: March 18, 2006, 09:31:56 PM »

Pooja, Nikki, Jeet

sach vich tusi sab ne bahut wadiya likheya e.

Good work by all of you.

Rajbir


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Pooja

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```pREEt gUMa dI ```

«Reply #14 on: March 19, 2006, 12:52:27 AM »

bahoot khoob nikki!!

Payaar vich pe ke, zindagi nu rol dita
kuch pla da mela c, umar bhar da dukh lita

Rut ta ake, chali gai, patjhar hun tak ethy eh
payaar da mosam hun nahi anna, dil jive ek pathar eh

jud tak manu samjh vich anda, tad tak rahan sooni c
Preet meri sanjna nal kithy, preet meri ta guma naal c!!!


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