seh lehna sab kuj

by lovely_nancy on January 28, 2010, 10:29:17 PM
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please suggest improvements :


Paa lavangi chudha kise hor de naam da
Dil vich yaad teri hovegi
Sab kuj seh lavangi ik apneya lai
Pave mardi mar javagi

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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2010, 02:07:52 PM »
Nice Nancy JI
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