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Naya_Daur

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Bhut bheed dil vich gama di rahi hai,
khushi bahron hi chale jaandian ne

kaade chaa (shadow) na nasseb hoi mainu
Phull pyaar de v mere te muskaraunde ne

bas akhan vich hi sarde rahe jazazzbat mere
hanju gam de geet sunaunde rahe ne

JEET jeetiya tan hai har bazzi zindagi di
Par pyar vich UH maat paunde rahe ne...!!!

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sanu sadde haal te rehn de
assi appe maan samjha la gay
tere naal nehin ta na sahi
assi kalle hi umar beeta la gay[/color]


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isha_verma7

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«Reply #1 on: March 21, 2006, 07:59:20 PM »

wah wah kamal da likha ha jeet.......keep it up!!!!!!!


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Pooja

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«Reply #2 on: March 21, 2006, 09:28:29 PM »

Her dard nai raah bana,
her jakham nai dawa bana
tune jab jab bhi yah dil torra
her jakham ko jaise aram milla

Kaise kah du kuch bhi na paya tujse
Her jakham, lahuloohan milla
Kaise na ban jaati Pooja pathar
Kin kin jakhmo ka usko daan milla


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Rajbir

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«Reply #3 on: March 21, 2006, 09:42:33 PM »

Jeet, Pooja

Kamaal da likhiya tusi dona ne.

Pooja tusi Jeet di hausla afzai layi likheya hai, chahe hindi wich he hai. Bravo !

Rajbir


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Pooja

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«Reply #4 on: March 21, 2006, 09:58:26 PM »

Veer ji bari koshish kiti ki punjabi mai hi likhu... magar punjabi de akhar huni ek dum deemag ch nahi ainde!!! te hindi de dorr dorr likh ho jandein ne !!! sad5


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Naya_Daur

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«Reply #5 on: March 23, 2006, 05:50:05 PM »

Laya ha jad toh rog,assi teri yaad da
jeen da sawad hai na, sawad hai maaran da

eh dil tera ghar hai, sajan teri yaad da
ehnu tordke na ja,tenu vaasta hai pyaar da

aandi rahi bahaar,jaandi rahi bahaar
par phull na koi kirdeya,mere dil de baag da

har vele JEET rounda reha,tere sarre hanju
Tu pher v na samjhe,mull uhde pyar da...!!!

thanks Rajbir bro n Isha,,, thanks a lot for encouraging!!!
te Pooja tusi bhut sohna likheya,, chahe,,hindi de words use ho jaande ne,, par poem bhut hi sohni huundi hai


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Pooja

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«Reply #6 on: March 23, 2006, 06:05:35 PM »

thanks Jeet!! ek koshish aor:

Sawal na kadi, koi v mai kitta
Jinda v onhe chaha, us raah chal ditta

Kadi shokhi, kadi shararta c
Badi payaari o din rata di raha c

Kado bahar mukki, kado patjhar aa gaya
Kado Milan di bela beeti, kado uddika da mosam aa gaya

Aa v ja hun, ke kidre pathar hi na ban java
Tu hi ake das ja, ki duniya nu kah ke apna payaar nibhava!!!


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Naya_Daur

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«Reply #7 on: March 23, 2006, 07:25:47 PM »

Gud Pooja,, just keep going on,,,

Aakhian ne vi saath chadeya,
Kiven karan deedaar tera...

Suneya kise gair di ban gayi hai tu
Par is dil da ki kara main, Jo ban gaya hai tera...

Jaiz nahin lagda usnu vi gair kehna
Jo katal karke hun ban gaya hai tera...

Rabb na kare sukk jave Ditta jo jakham mainu
Ik jhakham hi taan labheya baki ki nishan tera...

Dukh udh gaya mera pata lagya jadh mainu
Jis naal main si mareya Oh khanzar si tera...

Main Taan rovan lahu de aathru
Par jar nahin sakda main Hauka ik vi tera...

Dost ne methon pucheya,JEET,Tu kyu udas hain yaara?
Kinjh dassan tuhanu yaaro Dil cheekhda hai mera...!!!


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Pooja

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«Reply #8 on: March 24, 2006, 03:32:32 PM »

Ek hor paryaas kita hai Punjabi ch likhan da:

Ankhiyan hanju nal bhari, najre tanu urdike
Aa v ja mahiyan hun, le chale manu e bashinde

Jo tu sunya, thik v sunya, per eh na ilzaam lagai
Mai na kise di ho sakdi v, bas teri, man vich jayot jugaai

Rub jandan, ek mai sirf tere naal preet hai paai
Awein e na, jaan roll tu apni, na koi mere te Ilzaam lagaai

Sare ne gair ithy, dushman sari duniya mai banai
Ek tera hi hath hai thama, ab akar le ja, chahe bin shahnaai

Je v hun tu der kari ta, menu na dosh phir laai
Mai kha ke kuj v mar jaana, Doli ne arthi hai ban jaana


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nikki

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«Reply #9 on: March 25, 2006, 02:28:08 PM »

very nice Jeet n Pooja sis...tussi tan kamaal di punjabi likhde ooo sis.

ohdi yaad iss tarah aandi hai
jive mere sareer chon jaan nikal jaandi hai

main chiran(for long time) takk sochdi rehni aa
kyun oh mere khayalan ch aanda hai
kyun mainu har vele tadfanda hai
jisnu main kade dekhiya nahi
oh kyon meriyan neenda churanda hai


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Naya_Daur

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«Reply #10 on: March 25, 2006, 05:29:01 PM »

Chann channani milde rahe raatan nu,
saade lekhe(kismat) kyun vichore ne
pal judiyan de inhe lambhe sajna
lagda hun JEET de din thore ne...!!!


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nikki

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«Reply #11 on: March 25, 2006, 10:43:45 PM »

je hoia sabub tan milange sajna
nahi tan tu razi.. sada rabb razi

main kade tere kolon kujh mangiya nahi
ajj ik vaada mangdi aa...jadon maut aaye tan mil javin
kite aaven na ...meri ruh vi tere layi tadfadayee


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Pooja

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«Reply #12 on: March 28, 2006, 01:55:40 AM »

wah kay abaat hai nikki and Jeet!! bahoot khoob!!


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Naya_Daur

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«Reply #13 on: May 04, 2006, 12:15:46 PM »

Ajj Haal ki sunwa apni Dil di kahani da
kakh wangu rouldi payi Apni Jawani da

kadma ch rakheya c jehde apna sansaar
Tokran maar gaye ne uh Sare-bazaar

Ek pal nahi aaya jinu mera kade khayal
Ki likhayan main haal uss Dilbar-jani da

Ena Chandariyan yaadan nal hun nahi gujaara hunda
Koi anth labh dewe meri iss Zindagi di kahani da...!!!


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