Zehrela koi dank ban jaoo--------sheel didi

by sushilbansal on October 23, 2012, 01:53:40 AM
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Jay guvachey nay rang desh de khushiya dey
Tusi koi nava rang ban javoo
Duniya dekhdi reh javey
Tusi Sukhdev, jagatguru, bhagatsingh ban javo

Kadi fhayer tuhanu koi latarh na deyvey
Desh de dushmana laee
Zehrela koi dank ban javoo.
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«Reply #1 on: October 23, 2012, 02:23:15 AM »
Sheel didi v v nice....cha gaye tusi..
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masoom shahjada
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«Reply #2 on: October 23, 2012, 02:24:21 AM »
Jay guvachey nay rang desh de khushiya dey
Tusi koi nava rang ban javoo
Duniya dekhdi reh javey
Tusi Sukhdev, jagatguru, bhagatsingh ban javo

Kadi fhayer tuhanu koi latarh na deyvey
Desh de dushmana laee
Zehrela koi dank ban javoo.
Didi aapko punjaabi bhi aati hai, kabhii bataya nahii.
Apne ko to jyada punjaabi samajh aati nahi hai. Par ye post samajh me aa gayi hai.
Bahut achchaa likha hai.
Par didi aaj kise bura kahe hamare desh wale hi khud hamare dushman hai.
Neta'o ko hi le lo aaye din naye-naye fitne khare karte rahte hai.
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«Reply #3 on: October 23, 2012, 03:31:55 AM »
bahut achaa lagaa didi padh  kar thoda bahut samajh aa hee hayaa
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«Reply #4 on: October 23, 2012, 03:45:48 AM »
nice one
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«Reply #5 on: October 23, 2012, 06:37:30 AM »
Bhaav bahut sundar hai deedi
aur clear message bhi.
par masoom ka sawaal bhi vaajib hai.
kai baar mai chakra jaata hun..bheed me jaakar.. kisi ka chehra asli nahee..par kya karun.
mai bas khud ko zanzeer me baand sakta hun..vo mai karta hun..
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«Reply #6 on: October 23, 2012, 07:05:35 AM »
gd one
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«Reply #7 on: October 23, 2012, 07:28:20 AM »
nyccccccccccccc
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sushilbansal
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«Reply #8 on: October 23, 2012, 11:52:57 PM »
Sheel didi v v nice....cha gaye tusi..
Maja aa giya gaytri tariyu say dil ghabraney laga tha. thankyou very much for your time and inspiration.
sheel didi
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«Reply #9 on: October 24, 2012, 01:40:25 AM »
bahut khoob sheel didi
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«Reply #10 on: October 24, 2012, 02:27:28 AM »
bahut hi umda peshkash...
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