ki aurat,aurat di dushman hai?

maaee
ni maaee
tu wi uhi hai
jo kade teri maan si
ate jo kade main banangi
iselayee jaandi hai toon
ki nahin hai aasaan
mera is dunia wich aa ke
jindgi naal larna
kyonki is dunia wich
mainoo nahin howegi aajadi
apni marji naal kapre paan di
tainoo milan aan di
tere naal jindgi bitaan di
ate jithe marji aan jaan di

tainoo pata hai
ki main is samaj wich
ikalle nahin rah sakdi
addhi raat tak bahar nahin jaa sakdi
jinwe mera veer karda hai
kyonki
charon paase da mard samaj
agar karega koi paap
taan usnoon nahin
mainoo milegi usdi saja

garmi wich vi mainoo
rakhna pawega
is sharir noon dhak ke
kyonki
dekhke mainoo ghat kapriaan wich
mard samaj
kar dewega mere uppar hamlaa
jiwen kutteaan noon
mil gayee howe koi haddi

mere sochan te,bolan te
meri chal te,libaas te
mere khaan peen
ate haas parihaas te
kithe wi aan jaan te
us mard da pahra rahega
jisnoon samaj chunega
mere bhawikh de layee

main ik jajbaat nahin
ik sharir haan
jo ki kise saamaan di tarah
kharidiya wechiaa jaanda hai
apni marji naal nachaya jaanda hai
ate ghar wich sajaya jaanda hai

shayad ise layee
toon wi dindi hain
janam toon pahlaan hi
maar den layee
is mard samaj da saath
ate ih mard kahinde ne
ki aurat,aurat di dushman hundi hai

thanx pnkhuri ji for appriciation,actually in this poem i  tried to solve the quistion that "is really women is enemy of women" which is a common proverb of most of men.i personally think the real culprit is not women but men who decided all the customs of socity.actually makers of all the socity is men and in male dominated socity women is like a puppet only.......

1.founders of all the religions are men so it is decided by men that women should leave their perents for marriege and act according to the will of husbend and their family members.what will happen when husbend has to leave their home for women?will the relation of sasur-damad  not become same as  saas-bahu?

2.all the bread earning sources of production are in hands of men and he looks after his perents. women can not spend a paisa of money for their perents. so perents prefer son instead of daughters.who made this coustoms? the only answer.....men

3.perents has to do extra care of their girlchild because if anything wrong become,although culprit is men,women will held responsible.ultimately women will suffer for the deeds of men because for men,women is not a  humen but a body which should be "pavitter"and beautiful.this condition does not apply to men.and after marriege,she can not even go to meet the perents without the permission of husbend.so some of the perents prefer boychild.who is responsible?........male dominated socity ie men

so who made the women enemy of other women........