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ji karda main kavitri ban java
par bana kis tarah
oh sadra oh umanga
jagava kis tarah
ki main kavitri ban java
mohan nu banaya shayar
us di patni ne
par main oh kalpna, oh zazba
jagava kis tarah
ki main kavitri ban java
shiv nu banaya shayar
premika de viyog ne
par main oh dard
jagava kis tarah
ki main kavitri ban java
oh falsafe, oh nazare
jagava kis tarah
ki main kavitri ban java
varis nu banaya shayar
pagtari de prem ne
par main oh ishq
jagava kis tarah
ki main kavitri ban java
mann rupi samundar vich
khun-khankar tufan ban
machal rahe vichara nu
juda kis tarah
koi kalam bane sathi
jo iss tufan nu thal sake
par thal pava kis tarah
ji karda main kavitri ban java
par bana kis tarah
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«Reply #1 on: November 24, 2008, 03:19:29 PM » |
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Oye yara sachcha ishq ho dil wich bas har insan kavi hai
Rab naal ishq bhi hota hai, yeh baat ghayel nahi Guru Granth wich kabeer ne kahi hai
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«Reply #2 on: November 24, 2008, 04:19:17 PM » |
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DIL TUTIYA JADO MERA KAVITA BAN GAYI SADMA LAGA JADO MAINU KAVITA BAN GAYI AASOO JADOH AAYE ISHQ WHICH KAVITA BAN GAYI AKALLA JADOH PAYA MEHFIL WHICH KAVITA BAN GAYI GINNDA JADOH RATAH WHICH TAREY KAVITA BAN GAYI CHAND NU DEKHYA TANHA KAVITA BAN GAYI DIL JADOH TUTIYA MERA KAVITA BAN GAYI SADMA LAGA JADOH MAINU KAVITA BAN GAYI KAVITA BAN GAYI JASBIR SINGH hira_company@yahoo.com |
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«Reply #3 on: November 24, 2008, 08:14:49 PM » |
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nice work chaten, SG and Jas
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«Reply #4 on: November 25, 2008, 01:40:27 PM » |
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Thanks Pooja
Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #5 on: December 03, 2008, 12:55:38 PM » |
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thanx all for appreciating but this shayari is not written by me but by me didi.
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«Reply #6 on: December 03, 2008, 01:26:58 PM » |
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didi se kehna yo india ki member ban jaye qke uski choti behan ya bhai uski likhi hui poetry post karke famous ho gayee hain
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«Reply #7 on: December 05, 2008, 01:00:14 PM » |
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thik hai main kah dungi...sajid g.......but main unki poetry se nhi churati main khud bhi peoms likhti ho.....but thanx for apprceiating my di's work.
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«Reply #8 on: December 05, 2008, 04:01:32 PM » |
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thik hai main kah dungi...sajid g.......but main unki poetry se nhi churati main khud bhi peoms likhti ho.....but thanx for apprceiating my di's work.
AAP TOH NARAAZ HO GAYE LIKHTEY HO AAP BHI KUCH APNA YEH SUNKAR HAMAREY TOH KAAN KHADEY HO GAYE AAP BHI LIKHO , DIDI KOH BHI KAHO LIKHNEY KOH MILNEY AAYE HUM YAHA SAB KOH, KEH DOH KUCH BHI LIKHNEY KOH JASBIR SINGH |
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«Reply #9 on: December 06, 2008, 01:52:20 PM » |
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nahi mane bura nahi mana vaise maine ek peotry likhi hai love peotry in punjabi
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«Reply #10 on: December 06, 2008, 01:57:34 PM » |
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BAHUT AACHA LIKHA HAI  THANX FOR SHARING UR DI'S LINES CHETNA JI Baadal |
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«Reply #11 on: December 09, 2008, 11:26:20 AM » |
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nahi mane bura nahi mana vaise maine ek peotry likhi hai love peotry in punjabi
YEH TOH BAHUT ACHI CHEEZ KAHI HAI AAP NEH BHI EK POETRY LIKHI HAI JARA HAMEY BHI YAAR SUNANA DIL HA HAAL HAMEY BHI BATANA PADD KEY DOH CHAAR AKSHAR TUMHAREY BHI HUM BHI KUCH NAYA SEEKH PAYENGEY CHUPEY HUYE DARD KOH HUM BHI KUCH SAKOON DEH PAYENGEY JASBIR SINGH |
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«Reply #12 on: December 09, 2008, 12:15:16 PM » |
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YEH TOH BAHUT ACHI CHEEZ KAHI HAI
AAP NEH BHI EK POETRY LIKHI HAI
JARA HAMEY BHI YAAR SUNANA
DIL HA HAAL HAMEY BHI BATANA
PADD KEY DOH CHAAR AKSHAR TUMHAREY BHI
HUM BHI KUCH NAYA SEEKH PAYENGEY
CHUPEY HUYE DARD KOH
HUM BHI KUCH SAKOON DEH PAYENGEY
JASBIR SINGH
ji tuhde jinne change ta nhi haige ki par peotry mein post karti hai in love peotry section. |
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«Reply #13 on: December 09, 2008, 12:19:33 PM » |
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ji tuhde jinne change ta nhi haige ki par peotry mein post karti hai in love peotry section.
CHETNA CHANGEY SOHNEY DI GAL NAHI YEH GAL DA DIL WHICH WASEY JASBAAT DI HAI PADD LAWANGEY TWADEY DIL DI PUKAAR YEH GAL JASBIR TEH AITBAAR DI HAI u should have written the name of yr poem, toh thoda easy hojata. khair, let me check Jasbir Singh |
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«Reply #14 on: December 09, 2008, 12:30:06 PM » |
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CHETNA CHANGEY SOHNEY DI GAL NAHI
YEH GAL DA DIL WHICH WASEY JASBAAT DI HAI
PADD LAWANGEY TWADEY DIL DI PUKAAR
YEH GAL JASBIR TEH AITBAAR DI HAI
u should have written the name of yr poem, toh thoda easy hojata. khair, let me check
Jasbir Singh
well meri peotry hai loki kehande .......thanx for advice jasbir ji |
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