zindagi de rang

by nikki on March 18, 2006, 09:15:52 PM
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nikki
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meri ik koshish ..hope u people like it..

kuch soch ke jad main ghar to nikali
mere kadam ik jagah aa ke khalo gaye
jad main mud ke dekhiya ...eh ohi makaan si
ohi muhalla..jithe meriya yaada ne janam liya si kade

jad vi apne aap to begani ho jaani aa
ethe aa ke kuch pal bitani aa
iss jagah naal meri sadiya di saanjh hai

kade zindagi da sawera dekhiya si
ghardiya da laad te rishtedara da pyar dekhiya si
eh sama injh beet giya jive neend ch supna dekhiya si

fer kuch ajeha daur aaya
har koi muh mod giya
jiddan hove paraya

zindagi ne bade rang dikhaye ne
kade khushaali wale
te kade hanjoo ban ke jholi vich paye ne

main shukurguzaar haan rabb di
jisne kuch ajehe dost milaye ne
jinha naal hass ke zindagi de kujh pal beet jaande ne
kade oh meri sunde ne...te kade apni sunade ne

zindagi isse tarah beet jaye tan changa
nahi ta rabb rakha..mere akhiya ki hunda
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #1 on: March 18, 2006, 09:22:24 PM »
wah wah kamaal da likha hai nikki yaar.....keep it up....
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Rajbir
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«Reply #2 on: March 18, 2006, 09:38:32 PM »
Nikki

enna wadiya likhiya. Hun ta main tuhanu sada likhan waaste
majboor karanga.

Bahut gehra likh gaye ho !

Rajbir
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nikki
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«Reply #3 on: March 19, 2006, 08:20:35 PM »
thanx a million Isha sis n Rajbir for ur appriciation...i will try to write more stuff...aap bhi contribute karo....
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #4 on: March 19, 2006, 08:23:53 PM »
arre yaar tusi punjabi di gal kardaa ho, main toh hindi vich vi nahi likh dee yaar....hahaha.....
u carry on na, achaa lagdaa ha.....
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nikki
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«Reply #5 on: March 19, 2006, 08:30:36 PM »
hehe..oke sis..jaldi hi kuch aur bhi add karungi..
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nikki
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«Reply #6 on: March 21, 2006, 10:42:29 AM »
ajj zindagi aise makaam te khadi hai
na koi khulla rasta, na koi tang gali hai

meri soch vi shayad bimaar ho gayi hai
bahut dina ton chup badi hai

dil vichara pareshaan ho giya hai
eh kis kisam de halaat ne..
eh kisdi jadugari hai..
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nikki
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«Reply #7 on: March 24, 2006, 07:42:35 PM »
zindagi nu har rang ch dekhiya main
isdi har bahaar nu maniya hai

jad vi khushi di lehar aayi
gum de baddlan ne usde upper apna seena taniya hai

hun tan muddat ho gayi koi khushi dekhe
inz lagda je koi aa ke meri khaali payi zindagi dekhe
tan likh jaye kujh harf(words) mohabbat de
main ehna harfan de sahare hi jee lawangi
dukha nu vi sukh samajh ke pee lawangi
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ranjeet_rp
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«Reply #8 on: July 06, 2006, 02:13:00 PM »
NIKKI JI SAARE GEET WADHIAA HAN,ISE TARAH LIKHDE RAHO,
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nikki
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«Reply #9 on: July 16, 2006, 06:02:45 PM »
thank u so much Ranjeet ji..tussi kujh nahi likhiya?
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: July 17, 2006, 01:51:47 PM »
wah, bahoot khoob nikki!!
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nikki
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«Reply #11 on: July 27, 2006, 07:43:17 PM »
thank u so much Pooja sis..tussi reply karde ho tan mera hausla double ho jaanda .....its always been my pleasure that u read my poetry..bec. i think i have learned a lot from u.
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«Reply #12 on: December 13, 2007, 05:37:39 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB NIKKI,KAASH MAIN TUADE VARGA PUNJABI VICH INNA SONA LIKH PAANDA..BAHUT HI VADIYA LIKHAYA HAI..
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