APNI JAAN TO VADKE....

by Deepy on March 14, 2008, 05:15:00 PM
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Apni jaan to vadke tennu chaya c,
Tayon ta eh marjana dil tere utte aya c,
tennu chahke inj lagga, jive rabb nu main paya c,
tu jo marzi keh, par gallan terian te mainu gussa kade ni aya c,
fir ekk din pata ni sadde pyaar nu kisdi nazar lagg gayi,
ki jo soccheya v nhi c, osnu es taqdir vich paya c,
eh ta sab mare karma diya nishania ne, ki je tere nal nhi c nibhani,
ta Rabb ne tere nal katto milaya c,
ho sake ta bhul javi ve sajjna, ki tu vi kade apna paya c,
par ehe gall hamesha yaad rakkhi, ki tu sanu pyar karna sikhya c,
par je nibhana sadde naseeb vich nhi ta ki hoea,
par is dharkan de nal dil tera hi paya c,
tu eh kade na socchi ki main tennu bhull javanghi,
kiunki ajj takk kon apni zindaghi nu bhull paya c,
sab kehnde ne pyar Rabb da dusra roop hey,
par is roop nu kon samjh paya c,
ho sake ta bhull javi ve sajna, ki sannu vi kade apna paya c,
ho sake ta bhull javi ve sajna, ki sannu vi kade apna paya c,
eh ta sab kismat diya gallan ne,
nhi ta kine apni zindaghi to vishora paya c…
teri ikk-ikk gall chette aveghi, kiunki terian gallan ne hi sannu jeena sikhaya c…
hor pavein lakkh koshishan kar par neeta, sadde dil vich bas tu hi ekk jaga bana paya c…
koshish karna sannu maaf karn di, ki tennu ekk pyara supna samaj ke aya c,
ho sake ta bhul javi ve sajjna, ki tu sannu v kade apna paya c…..
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: March 14, 2008, 05:22:44 PM »
wowow deepy tooo good.. bada hi changa likhiya hai.... dil ke dard ko is kadar shabdo mai dhala hai ki ek ek shabd dard se dooba hua hai... bahoot hi khoobsurat rachna apne yaha likhi hai....

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Apka yoindia mai sawagat hai....
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«Reply #2 on: March 14, 2008, 05:33:30 PM »
Thnx Pooja ji.....  love4
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