Kahnu Tu Pardesi Hoya

by poppoetry on June 19, 2009, 11:02:14 AM
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Desh chad apna prayo da ho gya tu
Pardes di chandni vich jake kho gya tu
Kiven sab de pyar nu tu aj bhulya
Sanu dus kahnu tu pardesi ban turya

Maa ne tere utte apni raatan nu gwaya si
Har pal tainu buri najran to bchaya si
Godi vich khelda tu ankha vich vasda
Judai maa di zra v tu bardash nai si karda
Mamta di murat nu tu kiven bhulya
Sanu das kahnu tu pardesi ban turya

Tu hi si Pyu di zindagi di sabton vadi kamai
Tainu kise gal di onna  kade kitti na manai
Ungli pakad onna di tu raah vich chalda
Ona de bina tainu chain nahi si ek pal da
Pyu di us ungal nu tu kiven bhulya
Sanu das kahnu tu pardesi ban turya

Behna teri tere utte jind-jaan vaardi si
Veer-veer keh tere age-piche bhagdi si
Pyar onnu tere jiha na si koi karda
Odde bina tera ek pal vi na si sarda
Behana di surat nu tu kiven bhukya
Sanu das kahnu tu pardesi ban turya

Aaja hun aaja kai langh gye ne pur ve
Kehdi gal to hoya tu sabto dur ve

Roj Maa tere lyi khir h bnavdi
Khol khol booaa teri raah h nihardi
Har pal Pyu tera hanjua chipa reha
Vekh aake kinna o dard h pa reha
Behna teri tasveer vekh hanju h bahavdi
Aaja veere aaja teri yaad h jlawdi

Apneya de gumma nu tu kive bhulya
Sanu das kahnu tu pardesi ban turya........
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«Reply #1 on: June 19, 2009, 11:13:58 AM »
Wah wah Pooja ji,wonderful creation,very nice. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: June 19, 2009, 11:21:47 AM »
Bahut Wadhiya Pooja Ji, Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Kahnu tu veera pardesi hoya
Tadphi maa te baapu kina teri yaad ch roya,

Tu giya si ghar de khushi layi,
Jaa ke othe ghar to begaana kyun tu hoya,

Royi kinni waar teri choti bhain,
Ki tu kade na yaad kar aakhan nu bhigoya,

Karze le ke bhej taan ditta tenu,
Har karze nu taran layi zameen da tukda khoya,

Aaj wi udeek hai tere aaun di,
Dass we veere tera othe kamm hoya ki nahi hoya.

Shally.
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«Reply #3 on: June 19, 2009, 11:41:22 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on June 19, 2009, 11:13:58 AM
Wah wah Pooja ji,wonderful creation,very nice. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
thanx a lot madhu ji...... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: June 19, 2009, 11:50:44 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on June 19, 2009, 11:21:47 AM
Bahut Wadhiya Pooja Ji, Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Kahnu tu veera pardesi hoya
Tadphi maa te baapu kina teri yaad ch roya,

Tu giya si ghar de khushi layi,
Jaa ke othe ghar to begaana kyun tu hoya,

Royi kinni waar teri choti bhain,
Ki tu kade na yaad kar aakhan nu bhigoya,

Karze le ke bhej taan ditta tenu,
Har karze nu taran layi zameen da tukda khoya,

Aaj wi udeek hai tere aaun di,
Dass we veere tera othe kamm hoya ki nahi hoya.

Shally.
shukriya Shally ji....aapki lines ne is thread ki shobha aur bhi bdha di
yha likhne ka bahut bahut shukriya......  Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2009, 11:09:27 AM »
Bahut sunder likha hai Pooja Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2009, 11:11:31 AM »
Quote from: poppoetry on June 19, 2009, 11:50:44 AM
shukriya Shally ji....aapki lines ne is thread ki shobha aur bhi bdha di
yha likhne ka bahut bahut shukriya......  Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

My pleazure dear, tumne itna aacha likha ki sath likhne ko mann kar gaya..

Shally.
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«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2009, 11:18:02 AM »
Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on June 20, 2009, 11:09:27 AM
Bahut sunder likha hai Pooja Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI
Shukriya Sarvesh ji.
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«Reply #8 on: February 17, 2010, 07:42:36 AM »
Quote from: Nikhaar on June 19, 2009, 11:02:14 AM
Desh chad apna prayo da ho gya tu
Pardes di chandni vich jake kho gya tu
Kiven sab de pyar nu tu aj bhulya
Sanu dus kahnu tu pardesi ban turya

Maa ne tere utte apni raatan nu gwaya si
Har pal tainu buri najran to bchaya si
Godi vich khelda tu ankha vich vasda
Judai maa di zra v tu bardash nai si karda
Mamta di murat nu tu kiven bhulya
Sanu das kahnu tu pardesi ban turya

Tu hi si Pyu di zindagi di sabton vadi kamai
Tainu kise gal di onna  kade kitti na manai
Ungli pakad onna di tu raah vich chalda
Ona de bina tainu chain nahi si ek pal da
Pyu di us ungal nu tu kiven bhulya
Sanu das kahnu tu pardesi ban turya

Behna teri tere utte jind-jaan vaardi si
Veer-veer keh tere age-piche bhagdi si
Pyar onnu tere jiha na si koi karda
Odde bina tera ek pal vi na si sarda
Behana di surat nu tu kiven bhukya
Sanu das kahnu tu pardesi ban turya

Aaja hun aaja kai langh gye ne pur ve
Kehdi gal to hoya tu sabto dur ve

Roj Maa tere lyi khir h bnavdi
Khol khol booaa teri raah h nihardi
Har pal Pyu tera hanjua chipa reha
Vekh aake kinna o dard h pa reha
Behna teri tasveer vekh hanju h bahavdi
Aaja veere aaja teri yaad h jlawdi

Apneya de gumma nu tu kive bhulya
Sanu das kahnu tu pardesi ban turya........






Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Bahut Hi gehre Jazbaata Naal Eh kavita Likhi Hai Tussi..

Ek bande Taa Jo Apne Parivaar Naal Vichoda Paakar Pardes Jaanda Hai,Udha Parivaar Uss nu Kinj yaad Karda hai,bahut Hi Khoobsurti Naal Tussi Oh Maahol,Oh jazbe Nu Lafza Vich Utareya hai..

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«Reply #9 on: February 17, 2010, 07:43:39 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on June 19, 2009, 11:21:47 AM
Bahut Wadhiya Pooja Ji, Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Kahnu tu veera pardesi hoya
Tadphi maa te baapu kina teri yaad ch roya,

Tu giya si ghar de khushi layi,
Jaa ke othe ghar to begaana kyun tu hoya,

Royi kinni waar teri choti bhain,
Ki tu kade na yaad kar aakhan nu bhigoya,

Karze le ke bhej taan ditta tenu,
Har karze nu taran layi zameen da tukda khoya,

Aaj wi udeek hai tere aaun di,
Dass we veere tera othe kamm hoya ki nahi hoya.

Shally.

Bahut Bahut Khoob Shally!!!

Bahut Hi Acha Likheya  Hai Tussi Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: February 17, 2010, 02:04:14 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on February 17, 2010, 07:42:36 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Bahut Hi gehre Jazbaata Naal Eh kavita Likhi Hai Tussi..

Ek bande Taa Jo Apne Parivaar Naal Vichoda Paakar Pardes Jaanda Hai,Udha Parivaar Uss nu Kinj yaad Karda hai,bahut Hi Khoobsurti Naal Tussi Oh Maahol,Oh jazbe Nu Lafza Vich Utareya hai..

Bahut Vadiya pooja  Thumbs UP


Bahut bahut shukrana khwaish ji.....aapne inn lafjon mein chipe jajbaaton ko bakhubi samjha hai......bahut bahut shukriya  Usual Smile
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