CRITICIZE.!!

by qalb on December 18, 2011, 06:58:02 AM

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qalb

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   ' if you want to criticize someone do it in friendly manner but don't
   defame him .'

   ------- JAC RUSSLE

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mkv

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Re: CRITICIZE.!!

«Reply #1 on: December 18, 2011, 07:09:30 AM »

That's true.


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tamanna1

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«Reply #2 on: December 18, 2011, 09:23:05 AM »

VERY TRUE

But again...a person who is open to ideas, will take what is being said in a sportive way and he surely is a person who is willing to learn.

On the other hand there are people who could take anything as an insult..these people could be insecure, or people who refuse to embrace failure in their lives, people who want to be appreciated no matter what. etc..

so ultimately depends on who we are dealing with.


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sunildehgawani

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«Reply #3 on: December 18, 2011, 12:44:13 PM »

very nice n definitly right


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Sadiq Rizvi

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«Reply #4 on: December 18, 2011, 01:39:54 PM »

Sometime i can't digest weak poet's TUKBANDI and advicing them to write in meter so they must not hurt with my sugesion that's the only way they can write a good poetry


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tamanna1

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«Reply #5 on: December 20, 2011, 05:14:15 AM »

Sadiq ji..what is TUKBANDI???


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mkv

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«Reply #6 on: December 20, 2011, 11:03:15 AM »

Quote from: tamanna1 on December 18, 2011, 09:23:05 AM


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Sadiq Rizvi

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«Reply #7 on: December 20, 2011, 01:57:21 PM »

There are few rules to be followed in poetry for example.....After reading my ghazal,Shebaji wrote "mat kar dil ko uddas abb...kuch pyaar ki baat kar" Very simple and it's not even in meter that's why it's called TUKBANDI It must be like this " Na too dil ko apne udaas kar.....
Kabhi pyar vyar ki baat kar" You sing it in your mind then you will find the difference between TUKBANDI & good POETRY

khili thi kali pichle saal jo, Jo kali khili thi gaye baras
uss bahaar ki baat kar, Ussi pur bahar ki baat kar

jo dikhaye ghaltiyan sher mein
Na too aise yaar ki baat kar

Sadiq Rizvi


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tamanna1

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«Reply #8 on: December 20, 2011, 04:03:31 PM »

Sadiq ji..

thanks for the pointers.

But again, each one writes from his or her heart...It is what they emote at that moment right..Not everyone are looking at it to be perfect maybe because they just want their thoughts or their emotions on paper..

He na...I maybe wrong...But, somehow I feel each one has their own style of writing maybe not upto the mark, but definitely heart felt..

thank you once again


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khujli

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«Reply #9 on: January 30, 2013, 09:57:52 AM »

Quote from: mkv on December 18, 2011, 07:09:30 AM

That's true.


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khujli

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«Reply #10 on: February 27, 2015, 03:16:58 AM »

Quote from: tamanna1 on December 18, 2011, 09:23:05 AM

VERY TRUE

But again...a person who is open to ideas, will take what is icon_salut

being said in a sportive way and he surely is a person who is willing to learn.

On the other hand there are people who could take anything as an insult..these people could be insecure, or people who refuse to embrace failure in their lives, people who want to be appreciated no matter what. etc..

so ultimately depends on who we are dealing with.