***Aakhir Tum Mere Kya Ho..??***

by AVTAR RAYAT on April 30, 2010, 06:53:34 AM
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Aye Sanam,,,

Agar Door Hi Jana Tha..
To Nazdeek Kyon Aaye..?
Agar Sapno Ko Todna Tha..
To Sapne Kyon Dikhaye..?

Kya Khata Ho Gayi Humse..
Kuchh Keh Nahi Sakte..
Jab Itna Chaahte Ho..
Sath Reh Nahi Sakte...?

Ik Tumhare Jaane Se..
Dunia, Viraan Ho Gai Hai,
Ro-Ro Ke Zindagi Bhi,
Pareshan Ho Gayi Hai,

Ye Kis Galti Ki Saja Hai..
Jo Door Ho Gaye Ho,
Kyon Jinda Laash Bana Kar..
Kahi'n Aur Kho Gaye Ho,

Ye Sawaal Hein Mere Aapse..
Jawab Kyon Nahi Dete..?
Majhdaar Mein Kyo Chhoda..
Khabar Kyo Nahi Lete..?

Aapka...Dil, Hai Ke Nahi..
Bade Be-Dard Ho Gaye Ho..
Kya Yehi Hum Samjhein..
Aap Pathar Ho Gaye Ho..?

Aap Mein Aisa Hai Kya..?
Jo Aap Pe, Itna Marte Hein,
Kyon Na Chaahte Huye Bhi..
Itna Pyar Karte Hein..?

Kyon, Tumhare Siwa Hum..
Kisiko Kabool Nahi Karte,
Aakhir Ho Mere Tum Kya..
Jo Tumein Bhool Nahi Sakte..?

Bataayo To Sahi Jaana..!!
Tum Mere Kya Ho.!!
Aakhir...
Tum Mere Kya Ho..!!

AVTAR RAYAT
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«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2010, 07:04:14 AM »
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Wah Avtar ji apne dard ko bahut khoobsoorti se bayaan kiya aapne.heart touching poem.great work.keep it up.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: April 30, 2010, 12:47:33 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Avtar ji... bahut hi mohabbat bhari kavita hai aapki ye... !!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2010, 09:35:24 PM »
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Bahut khoob Avtar Ji
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«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2010, 10:54:00 PM »
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BHut Ache Avtaar ji ...............
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AVTAR RAYAT
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«Reply #5 on: May 01, 2010, 04:10:07 AM »
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Aap Sabka Bahut-Bahut Shukria...
Madhuwesh Ji,,,Klasker Ji,,,
Harish Ji,,,Neel Ji...
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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2010, 04:43:46 AM »
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well done  Winking icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut Applause
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«Reply #7 on: May 06, 2010, 02:42:08 PM »
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wah ! wah! bohat dard likha hai aapne avtar ji... behtareen.
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«Reply #8 on: May 11, 2010, 04:36:45 AM »
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Aapka Shukria...Wasil Ji,,,Saurabh Ji,,,,
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