Ab Aa Bhi Jao.........

by Pallavi Gupta on July 03, 2010, 03:57:28 PM
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Tum aa jao na...
Ek bar to aao na...
Ye to dil ki pukar,yu na thukrao,
Bas ek bar tum aao na....

Mana ye dil humara hai,par
Dil ne tumhe pukara hai,
Tum aise na chale jana,
Aa jana ek bar,phir wapas na jana...

Jaoge jab tum,hum ji na payege....
Tanha rahnapada agar to,
Hum yu hi mar jayenge
Aa jao phir na jana kabhi,
Aa jao......ab aa bhi jao na.....
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2010, 06:34:56 PM »
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very nice sharing pallavi ji thanx alot for sharing....
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2010, 07:21:52 PM »
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bahut achha likha hai pallavi ji....
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2010, 08:12:04 AM »
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Nice one Pallavi Ji
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Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Pallavi ji... bahut khoob...!!!
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