AB KOI

by EK LAMHA HOON MAIN on January 06, 2010, 10:11:41 AM
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EK LAMHA HOON MAIN
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ab koi dua hamare liye ki jati nahi
ab koi sandesh hawa hamare liye lati nahi
ab koi kali dekhkar hame muskurati nahi
ab koi parinda hame dekh kar chah-chata nahi
ab koi gulshan hamare jane se mahakta nahi
ab koi bund pyaas meri bujhati nahi
ab koi yaad hame rulati nahi
jab se tum ruth gaye ho hamse
tab se sanse bhi meri chal pati nahi
           Thankyou ! KAUSHIK  Thankyou !
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«Reply #1 on: January 06, 2010, 10:17:46 AM »
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very nice  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: January 06, 2010, 10:28:05 AM »
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nice lines....... Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: January 06, 2010, 10:32:17 AM »
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Lamha Ji bahut sundar poem likhi hai aapne. Andaze bayan bahut lateef hai.
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«Reply #4 on: January 06, 2010, 12:23:08 PM »
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Nice
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«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2010, 03:49:53 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2010, 09:25:17 PM »
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Nice lines Kaushik Ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 07, 2010, 03:43:38 AM »
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Wonderful creation Lamha ji,bahut khoob. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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