Adhoori si

by love4u on May 10, 2012, 06:50:29 AM
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Zindigi to jee rahe hai, par kuch adhoori si,
Dil main dard aur hoton pe hasi, vo bhi kuch adhoori si,
Kabhi jeete the unke saath vo khushi ke pal jo,
Un palon ki ab yaadein reh gai, vo bhi adhoori si.

Simatt sa gya tha mera vo jahan tere aas paas is kadar,
Ki na khudki na thi jahan ki koi khabar,
Ab to saara jahan hi lagta hai anjaana sa ho gya mano,
Aur Meri saasein bhi chal rahi ho, vo bhi kuch adhoori si.

Vo lamhe to tmhare saath bitaye vo na bhool sakenge kabhi,
Ab to lagta hai, vo pal na jee sakenge fir kabhi,
Bas unki yadein sameet ke rakh liya hai iss dil main is kadar,
Ki Jab bhi yaad karu iss to lagta hai gum hai zindigi main, par vo bhi kahi adhoori hai.
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«Reply #1 on: May 10, 2012, 06:51:43 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: May 10, 2012, 07:47:32 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: May 10, 2012, 03:35:12 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne Love ji... bahut sundar.. dil ko chhoo gayi aapki rachna... too good...!!!
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hriday ji dhanyavaad...!!! aap meri poems mere blog myheartlypoems.blogspot.com pe bhi pad sakte hai.. aur agar acchi lage to mere blog ko zaroor join kare...!!! Usual Smile
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Ji humein aapki rachna bahut pasand aayi hai.. aur aapka likha huwa aage bhi padhna chaahenge... maine join kar liya hai aapka blog....!!

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main vahi pad raha hu...!!! ek se bad kar ek poem hai aapki to ..!! main aapka fan ho gya hu..!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 10, 2012, 04:44:39 PM »
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