behte hue dariya

by Rana Khamose on May 04, 2013, 08:44:10 PM
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Behte hue dariya ki koi bebsi thi sisayad,
paani ke hothon pe tairti tisnagi thi sayad,
Umar talak bhagte rhe jis cheez ke peeche,
Makhmali khabon main lipti khudkusi thi sayad,
Muskuraya wo meri kabr par tabiyat se phir aaj,
Bejan dil ki dhadkanen phir se badhi thi sayad,
Mukkadar ki talas main manjil gumshuda thi ,
Mere hathon ki lakiron main koi kami thi sayad,
kuch is terah se wo samil rha miujh main barson,
Garam ret main jaise koi thandak dabi thi sayad,
Dum tod diya dopeharki kadi dhoop main jisne Rana,
Daudti sadkon pe wo hanfti zindgi thi sayad.

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«Reply #1 on: May 04, 2013, 10:06:00 PM »
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bahot umda... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 04, 2013, 11:45:11 PM »
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Behte hue dariya ki koi bebsi thi sisayad,
paani ke hothon pe tairti tisnagi thi sayad,
Umar talak bhagte rhe jis cheez ke peeche,
Makhmali khabon main lipti khudkusi thi sayad,
Muskuraya wo meri kabr par tabiyat se phir aaj,
Bejan dil ki dhadkanen phir se badhi thi sayad,
Mukkadar ki talas main manjil gumshuda thi ,
Mere hathon ki lakiron main koi kami thi sayad,
kuch is terah se wo samil rha miujh main barson,
Garam ret main jaise koi thandak dabi thi sayad,
Dum tod diya dopeharki kadi dhoop main jisne Rana,
Daudti sadkon pe wo hanfti zindgi thi sayad.


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«Reply #4 on: May 04, 2013, 11:57:27 PM »
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Behte hue dariya ki koi bebsi thi sisayad,
paani ke hothon pe tairti tisnagi thi sayad,
Umar talak bhagte rhe jis cheez ke peeche,
Makhmali khabon main lipti khudkusi thi sayad,
Muskuraya wo meri kabr par tabiyat se phir aaj,
Bejan dil ki dhadkanen phir se badhi thi sayad,
Mukkadar ki talas main manjil gumshuda thi ,
Mere hathon ki lakiron main koi kami thi sayad,
kuch is terah se wo samil rha miujh main barson,
Garam ret main jaise koi thandak dabi thi sayad,
Dum tod diya dopeharki kadi dhoop main jisne Rana,
Daudti sadkon pe wo hanfti zindgi thi sayad.





waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah ek rau ki zaroorat thi isko shayad Applause Applause Applause Applause ( spelling pe dhyaan de.n)
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«Reply #5 on: May 05, 2013, 11:10:10 AM »
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baht baht hi umdaa kalaam..
spelling aur har ek sher ke baad space dene ka dhyan rakheN

iss umdaa kalaam par daad aur mubarakbaad

aate rahen
likhte rahen
khus rahen
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